Another great chapter, I noticed at the beginning you had a fair few spelling or grammar mistakes, but as it got on I didn't notice any more. Great job, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

So is Ivy in league with Zazie and Arte? Or are they in separate factions?

Nice chap. But you forgot to change MIZORE and BEN to Zazie and Justin at the end if you noticed. So, you read mine and Paladin's Omnitrix to Vampire, huh? It looks good. So, what else is next?

Woo, Dead Space reference! Plus a Jack Black reference, lol, awesome. Great chapter, is that mysterious and dangerous Red Hooded girl at all inspired by Alucard from Hellsing? I just love that anime and I guess I saw simularities in the cool way she acts and the guns (Alucard doesn't use uzis though and is also the king of all vampires but you get the point).

Another amazing chapter, awesome fight scene and action packed story so far! ^_^ Reading on...

Awesome chapter, sorry for not reading sooner, I haven't gone through my alerts in AGES. ^_^ I can't wait for the fight between Isaacs and Leon and Justin.

Interesting; so is the girl at the end the "Ice Girl"?

Yo, love the chap and the costumes. So, I loved the chap's prologue. So, Ivy and Courtney's relationship is based on Barbara and Ivy's from The Batman, right? Also, I liked the next Rosario reference. Zazie is based on Mizore, right? Lillith has really interesting dreams, huh? Well, Hope to see more. Ciao!

Yeah, you obviously got some concepts from Van Helsing... the werewolves in that movie were the coolest I've seen besides Kotarou's recent transformation in Negima. Ever read the manga/anime "Hellsing", by the way? Nazi Vampires. Epic. Great chapter, though poor Leon didn't do as much as Justin. XD Got a profile of Elsa/Elda or Zazie yet? I'm interested in what they look like.

I wonder who that woman was. Obviously she's a monster hunter...but who does she work for?

heh. excellent. However, is the next story arc really starting next chapter? Hope you update soon!

"a little golden Rubix cube, a black stone-tablet book with a golden twin, and a strange cryptix-like container"

Golden rubix cube could give a character an interesting split-personality, and the cryptix plays a part, then I suppose someone's getting divine power? I wonder if angels will show up in this story? They're technically monsters, right?

If the mummy does show up, then he needs to battle it out with Revolta. Because that would be epic, though it'd have to happen in the later story arcs...

Have you given any thought to the Death Note making an appearance? Ryuk's a monster if I ever saw one, and the Death Note is certainly a worthy adversary for the Book of Goosebumps, don't you think?

And once again, Zombie Outbreak. And Nemesis as the boss. because it's obligatory in a horror story. :D

This story's pretty interesting. I caught the spider-man 3 take in the last story-arc. Fitting. I'm only sad that I didn't read it through earlier. It's more fun when most of the characters are Original.

Woah...a Mighty Max reference. That's new.

AWESOME! You updated! ^_^ Absolutely loving this story, by the way.

I was worried you'd forgotten about this; it is excellent to see it continue. I hope the Uber-werewolf can put up a good fight -- he's up against about a half-dozen powerful supernaturals; it would be rather disappointing for him to get beaten in 30 seconds!