Reviews for Breathe in, breathe out stop breathing

Murgy31 2007-10-12 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story!
Yemam2422 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abuseExcellent story! Really great writing. I like how you didn't reveal it was a hostage situation until halfway down and really focused on the emotions between Danny and Lindsay, which you described so well. I was really 'in the moment' of your story - I felt everything - Danny's concern for Linday and unborn child (loved Danny crying), Lindsay's own fear, and finally relief at the end. Great job!
berta101 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was really awesome :)
marialisa 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed this at DLC so I'm glad you posted it here too. Lots left to the readers imagination (which I love) in a nicely constructed fic. Look forward to reading more from you :)