 Coolbou 6/30/03 . chapter 7Hey, a new chapter! Coolies! But... WHAT! Veggie KNOWS! He's not gonna get in the way of anything, is he? Is he gonna make the whole story a total tragedy! *cries* He can't... but then suspense is always good for a story. Keep up the good work! Please! I love your work... so much... this story especially. |
 DarkSerapha 3/1/03 . chapter 7*sniff* How sad..
I am so glad you finally updated this! This was my first Trunks/Jyunanago fiction and I still like it very much!
And thanks for the review on Oh Kami!
Please continue! |
 Pandamneris 2/28/03 . chapter 7WOW. -_- That is SO AWESOME. You're a great writer; you should update this one more often! *glomps* |
 Coolbou 12/16/02 . chapter 6Write more! Write more! WRITE MORE! Pleeeeeaaasee... I love this story sooo much... keep writing, pleeeeeeaaase! |
 lime 9/14/02 . chapter 6 please write more i love it |
 DarkSerapha 9/10/02 . chapter 6*silence*
GOSH! Do I like this story! Noramlly I rarely read anything else than Vegeta x Goku and Trunks x Goten, but this has POTENTIAL! I really like how you weave that pattern! Can't wait to read more! |
 Coolbou 8/11/02 . chapter 5...Wow. Really wow. This is one amazing fic. I usually don't go for the dramas, but for some reason this one caught my eye... and now I've got a new favorite fic. I've read several yaoi fics that have something to do with either Trunks or 17, and I almost always get mad (they're MINE!) but this one's done so damn well I can't complain. You've got an amazing writing style. I can't really place it, but it's actually getting some emotion out of me. Fics don't usually do that unless they make me laugh. Again: This is one amazing fic. Keep up the good work. |
 Khameleson 11/13/01 . chapter 4you've got to write more soon |
 underaouf 10/9/01 . chapter 4...wow. That basically describes this fic... That can't be it! Write mooore! |
 underaouf 10/9/01 . chapter 2I'm so proud of myself now! I figured it out before you mentioned the name! Eh... sorry. Well, I *must* keep reading! This is awesome! |
 Dragon of Sakura 9/14/01 . chapter 4Great! I cant wait till the next chapter, keep up the good work! |
 Dragon of Sakura 9/2/01 . chapter 3Great story! I cant wait for the next chapter. :-) |
 namek kaia 8/29/01 . chapter 2 story was good. i can't wait to read what happens next. What a cliffhanger! keep writing. |
 Ares 8/27/01 . chapter 2Hah! I knew it was Seventeen when you said "the same colour as mine" in ch.1. Seventeen, Eighteen and Trunks are the only ones with blue eyes, and you said yaoi so it couldn't be Eighteen! Good story. You really get into 17's mind. Keep going. |
 Asphyxia 8/26/01 . chapter 2I love you, Cinaed. |