Awesome chapter!

I loved the battles and the cliffie

Poor Hinata, she can't resist Naruko's teary eyes

And now the Sailor Senshi will join the fray, is anyone else going to join?

And like you, I think Hinata should have dismembered or at least maimed Sakura for the phony confession

Is the Juubi going to appear in her or something like him?

See you later!

Epic batles are awesome. I liked the robot at the end best, perhaps because there was more tension. Cinnamon going all nightmare magic on the Tarrasque was pretty cool though.

And I liked how the fights and all events were inter-related. I remember in Naruto the Kitsune Hanyou, there were these four progressive fights in Orochimaru's lair and completely isolated. This way is more interesting.
Ranko making a door affects Naruto's battle and then Naruto using the Solar Rasengan influences Ranko and Thyme against Seniki.

Ranko in the armory, very cool. Singing sword and her aversion to any others that talk.
Looting was very RPGish, and I like that.


Toshi and Cinnamon, that first scene was funny. Not a fan of lemons though.
LOL! At Thyme just before that.

Kudos for the date scene. That was pretty long and detailed. Wasn't expecting the 'essence of Succubus' or for Hinata to have it. I don't want to know what it is or how Cinnamon got it.

Also great job on the transition between the date and the new enemy arc. It was like a bubble being popped.

Sailor Moon is going to be a part of this? This muti crossover is getting better every time! Would you like Hinata to have a boy, girl, or Co-ed twins?

I always did hate vampires. Nice touches.

Ahh, you updated on my birthday with sweet battle and lemon scences(I'd say I love ya, but I ain't that kinda guy). Love the Mario cameos too.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Awesome chapter.

I'll say it once, I'll say twice, I'll say it to the infinte D-man you are an...AWESOME writer! You make the long waits for chapter worthy, as the chapter have both quality and quantity...maybe lenght?... not sure.

Anyway, I liked the battle with the Tarrasque it was...I don't know but I liked it.

Yet the best part of the chapter was the mega date of Naruto/ko and Hinata... the part with the Disney songs was a really nice touch; though I sugest you warn the readers to have the songs prepared, it will help to transmit the mood I think you are trying to get.

As for the lemons, I said it last chapter I think you should lay them a bit more scarse.

Till next chapter

Dusk

D-man, I LOVED this chapter the high amount of D&D references helped. You see I am quite a D&D fan.
You showed three of my favorite monster/creatures of the game (Lich, Vampire and... Tarrasque)

Oh and concerning the lich's weapon is it an allusion to Nerul's weapon? ...Lifedrinker or something like that...

Now its cruitiques time.

I guess the increased amount of sexuality bothers me a bit. I don't say I don't enjoy it; but sometimes it is a bit too much (at least to my tastes.)

Also the Cinammon/Thoshi... seems a bit unecesary (sp?) to me, but hey that's just my opinion.

As for grammar and spelling critiques, well I am not a good judge on that (non-native english speaker coupled with lack of attention to those details.), but at a glance I think that this chapter is well constructed


I also love the way you mesh that many universes, it actually reminds me of a free form rpg I play with my friend but I am starting to derail.

Anyway congratulations on such a good chapter (expect another review soon cause I am about to start reading chapter 8)

Until next review

Dusk

you're alive! I thought you had died...then again, I'm not one to talk much...anyways

I thought this chapter was really good and the lemons were superb.

DASM

well, the Tarrasque went down relatively easily. the rest of the chapter was rather fun to read too.

Solar Boy Django?

Wow...

So Saffron had a chid? I didn't expect that

But it was a great twist to make Suzaku Saffron's mom

Cinammon is a great characterin my opinion and I look forward to her relation with Toshi and how it will affect the story

And Naruko-chan's Hinata's new pet? Didn't see that coming

BTW congratulations!

See you next chapter

P.S: Have you seen naruto's manga recently?

I just read ur story " Naruto The Kitsune Hanyou" and I thoyght that it was a REALLY AWESOME fi.c
But the sequel is not upto level of first.I think u included too many crossovers.

Its been a long time.I needed this.

Herb and Saffron...ROFL! The reveal there was great, especially with Cassia's imput.

Ranko and Thyme was cute. I pbeleive thers'a phrase saying that if you wear a mask long enough, you forget you're wearing one. ^_^

Ah, so THAT'S the ladle lady's skills work!

It seems Cinnamon has embraced her hentai horde instead drop kicking like the rest of the main cast.

gennin really shouldn't be able to summon boss creatures on a whim...

LOL at Naruto durring the massage session


mass battles with goblin incaders. Always fun.

Looking forward to epic battles!

What is a Tarrasque it sound scary is it really that bad.