This story is absolutely amazing. I hope they end up together after the last book.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. It was all very touching, and exactly like what these two would say. I've always loved this couple and I always will...everything Bobby and Loor said was painfully true. They can't fight fate.

Fantastic fanfic!

nice

This was absolutely beautiful. I hope that you write more BobbyxLoor fics!

Keep it real,
CW

Man, that was so touching. I just had to cry. I want more. Your stories are amazing. I think out of all the others you wrote this is truly my favorite. I would like to read a much longer story of the relationship of Bobby and Loor. So please I'm begging you write more.

2 words: LOVE IT

Hmm. I liked this. It's interesting how you show the Bobby/Loor relationship. I would like to know what circumstances led up to this story though. Are they living together now? Are the two of them really in a relationship, or is this just temporary? But at the same time, I also like that you didn't say any of this in the story -- I like that you just focused on that one moment in time, instead of going through and explaining how they got there. Yeah, you could say I've got conflicted feelings on that point. XD Anyway, another great fic, nice job.

Wow. I really liked it. It was amazing. You write so well. Awesome job well done.

cute!

I loved it. It really was inspiring. It gave me things to think about while i read the series.
-Flare (Zale's Girl)

This was the most wonderful, beautiful, and inspiring, Fanfiction I have ever read. I love your writing. Thank you. You gave me entertainment.
-Autumn:-)

Rather short, but satisfying. loor is more in character, I'm happy to report. nice job with the name metaphors. do they have plates on zadaa? x3 I laughed at loors attempt at pronouncing 'biscuit ball'! xDD keep writing, for your truly.

very deep i felt myself getting smarter as i read lol do u think bobby and loor will get to gether in the next book after pilgrims of rayne

that was a great story. I wish we could have found out how they ended up sleeping in the same bed. I find it very interesting that in both of your bobby/loor stories it seems like loor isn't so much in love with him as trying to comfort him. like she's only in a 'relationship' with him because that's what he wants, and she would be perfectly fine if they were just friends. Am I completely off on that? whenever I view this ship I think of it more like bobby and loor are both in love with each other, bobby is just more self actualized. he's realized his feelings and is willing to admit/accept them, where as loor hasn't fully accepted/realized her own feelings.

I love how you put it, 'the bobby of second earth no longer exists'. I think that is so true, and it applies to all of the travlers, not just bobby. none of them are the people they would have been if they hadn't become travlers. it's like their destinies splintered off from the ones the previously had. that's why I think the courtney/bobby ship would never work (the same goes for boka/loor). I'll stop rambiling now. great story. I hope to see you do another (longer) story soon.