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Reviews For: Closing Time

MyShadowsThorn
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseKai X Ann what an interesting pair... I love Ann's...hmm I guess I'll call it headstrong nature... Ann who is also kind of shy when it comes to romance and Kai's bolder nature makes such an fun to read about combo
All in all...I'm gonna have to describe this whole story as
bewitchingly delightful :)
Truly Ever After
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseAw, cute ending. I could picture everything and Ann and Kai are so in character :P

KaiAnn...wow, never thought of that before haha.
Awesome Rapidash
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseThat was a cute story and a unique pairing! As always you did a really good job of bringing the story to life right before out eyes! I really felt the emotions and could easily picture the scenes as I read. Awesome job! ^__^
Momo-chan12
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseI totally loved it!Wow,I never would've thought of a pairing like them but the way you wrote about them made me love them together,it was so sweet!^^I wish you could write a full length fic on this someday,I'd love to read it XD Now I want to write a KaixAnn story,its a great pairing I just hope Popuri won't kill ann(hides)Wait to go,this was wonderful and I loved it so much
Scarlet
2007-10-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseMy review got cut off! Oh, darn...and I'd written so much...

Urgh. Now I don't know what to say.

Oh, wait! (lightbulb) Description. Yes, I said I enjoyed the description. And the whole cuteness...Kai and Ann were so in-character. It was fabulous.

Man, now I want to write Kai x Ann...so much potential! Good job.
Ekoaleko
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseNoonlit Dreaming, you just made me love a pairing I'd never imagine loving, let alone liking o.o I don't think cute can describe it... at all. And I'm too lazy to go to a thesauras. I love your descriptions... not too scarce and not too chunky. Not too detailed and not too vague. And the dialogue is definitely something adorable.

So in-character. You never cease to hold my attention :D
Ultra Drama Queen
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseAww! Yay, a Kai x Ann one-shot, huzzah! This was very cute! Kai + Ann = TOTAL LOVE! yay, ok, bye now!
The Scarlet Sky
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseOh, how cute!
StarrNight
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseAw!

KaixAnn isn't a pairing I particularly like, but they seem cute in this oneshot.

Good job. Nice wording.
jean cooper
2007-10-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseWhoo! Anne and Kai..the possibilities! Good job on the one shot...could possible become more than that if you felt up to it, but you could also leave it a one-shot. either way you did a wonderful job!
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