hey guess what keri

**new fan!**
but this is also a fan that sees you every day..MUHAHAHAHA!
i can tell you to update soon!

but if anyone who has read any of your other stories it is going to be an "unevenrtfull" story coughcoughNOSMEXcoughcough...
sorreh just getting over my sickness...

MEOW

-HEP-

Keri keri keri...you & your incest obsessions...

well, story was pretty good. Short but good. Keep writing damnit!

sorry it took me so long to read this. Glad I did though =). Very nice premice for a fic

c'mon please write more kuz i luv it

Dammit, I forgot to review the last chapter. *sigh* Guess it's a two for one deal here:

I did not find any typos here.

I liked how Kibt tried to defend himself in the third chapter and then Zim helped out. It was pretty...cute for lack of a better word. I also liked how ZiPT's relationship with Zim, how he's the only competend robot and only Zim can understand what the hell he's saying. It's certainly unique, though I have trouble picturing what ZiPT looks like.

I have to say, that incest joke was funny. It reminds me of an online comic I read actually.

I really like Valle too, very intresting character. So's Kibt too.

I hope to see this updated.

-A crappy reviewer

That was freaking awsome! I like how the robot thing well...you know what it did. Can't wait for more. Heh...the Tallest paid. (Laugh insanely)
^_^
Dlbn

Oh, that was so great!

This is by far the best OC involving Invader Zim fic I've read in years. Please keep it up. I have to know what happens

Woah, such an..action-y chapter. And cool at that.
I'd love to see a picture of ZiPT,to understard what it looks like better. Well, that, and to figure out what its name stands for. You're taunting me, aren't you? XD.

I can't wait for another chapter~ Keep up the good work ^^.

OC: Character not present in the series, invented by the fic author, sometimes useful to the plot.
Mary-Sue: OC that the author tries to make us love by all means.

There's a small difference in the way they're written, and you manage to not force-feed us love for Kibt, which makes him an Original Character and not a Mary-Sue. So congratulations, you passed the test ^_-

I'm really curious about the rest of the story, I sure hope you'll continue it! :D

I kinda like it so far. Not getting how Red killed Dib, especially since they never bothered with contacting Zim let alone decide to mess up his love life. I'm going to be really interested in this story. PF: I heart Kibt he's too cute, not kid cute but like someone said something in a way cute.

There was this presense about leading to the feelings of Valle/Kibit in here. I liked that chapter...mostly that comment that the news said that Zim said. Nice one.
^_^
Dlbn

Good story so far. I wonder if Zim cared or will care about Kibt as much as Kibt says he does.

THis friendship with Valle and Kibt is really cute!

I can't wait to see what will happen if KiBt meets Zim.

"Did anyone else sense a bit of Kibt/Valle in this chapter?"

Yes...yes actully. Heh, and I thought I was reading in too much of what was happining (I do that a lot).

Only problem is this paragragh:

“Exactly! I need to pick what I’m going to wear now so I can get there early! The place’ll start filling up at ten, so I’m going to try and get there as soon as I wake up so I can get the best seat possible!” he stood there looking at one of his lab coats, his smile slowly fading before he was frowning completely. “Valle: I- how can meet him if he’s going to be executed?” Valle couldn’t help but face-palm. “I…oh my Tallest! Valle they’re going to kill him!” he fell to his knees, holding the coat close to his chest. The realization hitting him hard. “Th-they can’t do this! I love h-him!” But Zim was a defect, the number one criminal in the universe. Causing more destruction, senseless murders, acts of treason, and inter-species mating then any Irken who had ever been hatched. Not to mention him murdering two Tallests and now the attempted murder of a third. As well as driving three of the most powerful control brains insane and joy-riding the Massive. With the Tallests still in it!

It needs more spacing:

“Exactly! I need to pick what I’m going to wear now so I can get there early! The place’ll start filling up at ten, so I’m going to try and get there as soon as I wake up so I can get the best seat possible!” he stood there looking at one of his lab coats, his smile slowly fading before he was frowning completely. “Valle: I- how can meet him if he’s going to be executed?”


Valle couldn’t help but face-palm.


“I…oh my Tallest! Valle they’re going to kill him!” he fell to his knees, holding the coat close to his chest. The realization hitting him hard. “Th-they can’t do this! I love h-him!”


But Zim was a defect, the number one criminal in the universe. Causing more destruction, senseless murders, acts of treason, and inter-species mating then any Irken who had ever been hatched. Not to mention him murdering two Tallests and now the attempted murder of a third. As well as driving three of the most powerful control brains insane and joy-riding the Massive. With the Tallests still in it!

I'm not great at spacing, this is the best I can do as an example.

I liked how you made Zim return, coming to kill Purple and such. Quite creative.

I don't have much to sayy, gah.

-A crappy reviewer