wow that is dark. good job though.

I like it even if it was sad i like it

Wow, you are one seriously awesome author!! >W

Oh wow that was great i lov it

You're a very good writer. I never carried for the pairing. But the writing is just too good to ignore.

wow... so sad... but it was awesome!

Just wanted to say that this was proably one of the most intense stories i've seen here. I really liked it. :] well done!

Wow this was sad...but good.
i liked it.^-^

Ah, dark child, I could start the death odes now, but instead, I will consider this merely a little venture into the twilight zone...LOL...It reads like a prose poem. Cool.

wow...wow...wow... that is all i can think in my mind... no erros AT all! and omg u can like actually FEEL how Kagome feels... wow...wow...wow... great... just great!!