Umm getting raped by Naraku does not sound nice at all. Poor Kagome, maybe he liked that she looked like Kikiyo. If I were her I'd go back home, through the well. This wasn't too sick. I could stand even sicker. I'll read the other thing.

wait...WHAT? I don't get it.

way to short

:( i dont get it! i dont get how it ends!!

i like it please add more.
Kamorea Chan

Just the mention of Guns n' roses got me to read this right away. Great begininng, setting the mood, I look forward to more!

wow, nice beginning, i really wanna see what happens now

OMG you HAVE to update and I mean not a week or month from now, I mean...like with in the next two days!! I have to read what happens. Your story already hooked me after this first chapter! You're a really great writer from what I can see so far, so please you MUST update again SOON!