darling i love the idea but dont think me being rude but u could have done a tad better by explain more on what naraku was doing to kagome and how she came into his possession

but all in all great story

Umm getting raped by Naraku does not sound nice at all. Poor Kagome, maybe he liked that she looked like Kikiyo. If I were her I'd go back home, through the well. This wasn't too sick. I could stand even sicker. I'll read the other thing.

wait...WHAT? I don't get it.

way to short

:( i dont get it! i dont get how it ends!

i like it please add more.

Kamorea Chan

Just the mention of Guns n' roses got me to read this right away. Great begininng, setting the mood, I look forward to more!

wow, nice beginning, i really wanna see what happens now

OMG you HAVE to update and I mean not a week or month from now, I mean...like with in the next two days! I have to read what happens. Your story already hooked me after this first chapter! You're a really great writer from what I can see so far, so please you MUST update again SOON!