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reighost
2009-06-16 . chapter 3
at this point in time arent naruto sasuke and sakura supposed to be twelve?
ShatteredRhapsody
2009-06-05 . chapter 3
One word: Kawaii.

I'm too speechless to say anything else.
Hana Kogane
2009-05-21 . chapter 3
I really like this story >.< pleas update soon.
TheSecretUchiha
2009-05-11 . chapter 3
OMG!
this is such a good time-travel fic. luv that naru's taking on the sound four in such a bad-ass way!
now, i know i just asked you in another review to update another story but, God, ur stories are just so good!
update this one aswell please!
happyalien
2008-11-01 . chapter 3
update soon plz! im rather interested in this story so hope you continue! :D
Milisant
2008-10-07 . chapter 3
Interesting story. Pls update soon!
monogurui
2008-09-17 . chapter 3
Even though it's only three chapters, this is by far near the top of my favorite time-travel Naruto stories. Thank god I didn't have to read through five chapters of back story or much through a feature length description of the complexities of a time travel jutsu... that would have been tragic. XD

Anyway, your flow was great, as was your grammar and spelling, and the plot has turned out nicely so far. This isn't very long, but there's not much to criticize, and I could go for days coming up with comments, so thus, the shortness. I hope you update soon!
The Silver Fallen
2008-08-21 . chapter 3
COOL. But... you cut it off... there. Why...? How...? But... IT'S SO GOOD. Your writing is like... my drug. Yes, that's what it is. Umm... without all those nasty associations, that is. More like... a favourite food that I could never get enough of. Or tired of. Yes, that is much more accurate.

Poor Sakura. INNER FANGIRL!SAKURA ATTACKS! And Naruto kicks ass...? (not sure about that yet, but I'll wait to find out) Rokudaime mode shall play a very interseting role, I see, as will that trigger thing with pinkette. Very nice way of involving chacter depth.

WHAT ABOUT KYUUBI? He was mentioned... once. And very superficially, too. I know the story is supposed to revolve around Team 7 and trying to prevent that future, but Team 7 does technically include Kyuubi. =D
Cheerleader16
2008-08-20 . chapter 3
AWESOME I'm really loving this fic but I dont like the idea of sakura being her annoying self-love sasuke's expression concerning naruto's vocab!!
DMLpacker
2008-08-07 . chapter 3
Gaah I want to see Naruto kick ass. And to prove to the villagers that he's awesomeness incarnate :)
mochiusagi
2008-08-07 . chapter 3
um I thought that they were 13 when sasuke went away and 15 when naruto came back with jiraya? Please update soon!
MidnightFox
2008-08-01 . chapter 3
OMG NO! Dont take it down! I can already feel myself dying inside! *hysterical sobs*
Sexykill69
2008-08-01 . chapter 3
I know how you feel, I pointedly avoid fighting scenes enless it's a battle of will of violence.
Good luck with the next, this one took so long. -_- be ashamed!
Jk~ You're great.
icyhiei
2008-08-01 . chapter 3
Great chapter! I really like this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I wonder if Sasuke will notice the fight? I don't know if that would be good or bad...
SanzOgirl
2008-08-01 . chapter 3
Cool. Can't wait to read what happens next
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