hey! i'm a new fan of yours, and i found this to be absolutely funny and adorable!

hahahaha! This story was hilarious and serious, and you blended them together perfectly. While I was playing RTMT I always wondered if there would be a cutscene where the little kids played a prank on someone, and if they had used something like this it would have been a credit to the game. You went from funny to serious perfectly, almost like you flowed from one to the other. Hopefully you keep writing storys like this! By the way, i got to your profile from hmgirly, and im grateful to her. Keep Writing!

this was very good! i know i really hate the GrayxMary pairing. but i liked this story, alot!

Aw. Poor Gray! He probably would've died of shock/embarrassment.. Poor guy wouldn't know what to say. Probably stutter to death, heh, heh. I completely agree with Mary's "It sucks to be a woman." thing. So true, sometimes. I really enjoyed reading this. :)

Nice. This was cute. You should turn it into a series.

Squee,I loved this!^_^Yay MaryxGray thats such an adorable pairing and this was an amazing story!I was going 'aww' the whole time and the ending made me laugh alot!You really deserve more reviws this rocks(cheers)Excellent work and I hope to read more from you soon,good luck and keep on writin'!

That. Was. EFFIN AWESOME! Going on my faves.

' nuff said. Cha.

Wow I loved this is was just so adorable! Kai and Gray are my fav guys in the game so this story made me go all warm and fuzzy!
this gets...two thumbs up! (I'd give you more but my hands are kind of at a disadvantage)

Oh, am I really mean? (blushes in embarrassment) I swear, I hate to offend people, I just really, really want the game to go smoothly and every time someone messes up it confuses everybody! I'm sorry if I scared anyone. Really.

Your story was adorable! Grary...*floatinghearts* Ah, I luffled it. And I second Mary's comment: it sucks to be a woman! Haha, poor naive Gray.

Excellent work. (And again, sorry!)

OMG! That was so funny and cute, I was smiling throughout the whole story! The last line was helarious and super cute at the same time, you are one amazing writer to make me go "Aww!" AND burst into a fit of giggles! Ok, bye now, write more like this soon!