Lol!

i died laughing at the ending great story :)

This story was so cool! new fave

Awsome story. Love it love it love it

hurry

With the younger sibling thing, tell me about it, my little brother thinks that Chi-Chi is pronounced Chia-Chia, and that if he throws a bunch of punches and kicks, that he will be able to use ki, and that you can squirt maple syrup and call it a ki blast, he is such a moron, andwith the tom boy thing, same here

:D that was funny!

very enjoyable.

haha that was a nice one-shot :)

and i know what you mean about the tomboy part and not wanting to ruin your reputation ;) haha

my dad found out about my secret stash of romantic novels and said it was an insult for my intelligence

then i said that my intelligence wasnt the only thing that needed to be fed.. or something hahaa

anyway :D :D nice job and write more!

lmao vegeta! he was just there in the background

LOL! I burst out laughing at the ending! Awesomeness!

it's awsome and funny

you should write more stuff like this

Lol That was pretty great!

hope you don't get into too much trouble.

good fic, short but still the right lenght for what you've done keep up the good work.

lol, i do the same thing! i secretly work on my stories. ;)

This story was fun to read! i envy your ability to come up with an idea so fast. If i were babysitting, i'd probably be on the couch and think for hours of what story i should make, while the kid i'm babysitting makes a mess in the house. then when my babysitting time is almost over, i still have nothing, and i still get this big mess to clean up. lol.

Good luck with your secret story writing. lol. I hope to see more of your work soon!

great story! i love vegeta at the end. thats so him