I Love it Ryoko is the best

that was a cute story you made the charecter's much like they are in the show good stuff.

please update and finish this fanfic. i'm just dicovering the world or tenchi muyo fanfiction world. i love this fic so far. please update soon.

aw! that's such a great story. it's so cute. i love it! tenchi and ryoko make the cutest couple! well, ja ne.

I Love it though i thought kiyone was a little to harsh on mihoshi when she threw her outside that Was mean but i still love it.

RYOKO FAN FOREVER

ALL THE WAY YA'll

sweet

I dont think that this ending is corny at all. I enjoyed this story a lot!

(soul & ryoko) *giggling madly like giddy schoolgirls* (ayeka) *waterfall tears* I WANTED TENCHI! WAAA! (soul & ryoko) TOO BAD! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

*eyes get all big and chibi-ish* awwww! cutie! i wuv a good tenoko (tenchi X ryoko!)! (ryoko) *eyes same as soul's* ditto! *both start acting all firlish and squeal* (kiyone) *sweatdrop* erm...

poor widdle ryoko! (ryoko) erm...widdle? (soul) what? *draws out chibi-fyer, a device that turns anime characters into their chibi form* (ryoko) *whimpers* (soul) i liked this chapter! gonna go read the rest! _ (ryoko) _

i guess i can't really say 'write more pwease,' since u already finished this...i just found it...but it's really good, and trust me, if i could say write more, i would! _

I like this new chapter 3 better then how it was before-much sweeter (I know, that sounds kinda really stupid) and more fitting. It's just great.

*clap clap clap clap*

Well done! It was written well! One of the best stories that I've ever read!

It was good, it wasn't really corny, maybe a little. It was cute though. Maybe you should make a sequel of their trip, if you want.

Awww, cute ending. Nice to see Ryoko & Ayeka make nice. A sequel about their honeymoon. would be nice.