That was great

It displayed some real talent

i particularly like the part

'Their name is Abhorsen

They slay the dead'

Very nice.

It is EX-TREM-LY true to the story line.

Exelent.

Well written, it has a good ending. Nice and short.
I think you should do another fiction like this in verse form so people can get a more descriptive and wider view of Sabriel and Lirael.

Wow, that's realy good. You did especially well at describing the Abhorsen and the books, i loved how you incorperated descriptions of the bells and the bit about the sword.

I loved all those books by Garth Nix! So glad other people do too!

You did and excellent job with that . I love how you still used parts from the book, but it was still original. good Job!

Wow! I really liked this! It does seem an aweful lot like my poem; how curious, I've never read this. Very interesting. A bit too repetitive at the end, though. Nicely done.

Miiko

Is Abhorsen out yet? And i just went to the book store too and I forgot to get it! *smacks head into desk*

This does true justice to the honorable men and women that are the Abhorsen :) (but you forgot Mogget :P) This is a great poem that captures the Abhorsens well, and doesn't forget that they are people, too.

awww *squeals* i just searched for Sabriel thinking there will be NOTHING, but *G* there was! omg how much can you not wait for Abhorsen to come out?

wow, very very cool!

Oh, that was good! I even got goosebumps in places ...

Yay! A Sabriel/Lirael fanfic! I'm so glad someone wrote something about this fantastic books. Wonderful poem. Only one question, did you mean ballad instead of bald? Easy mistake to make : )

I like the way you used the phrases from the books in this, too. Well done.

Allright! I love Sabriel and Lirae this was good and I enjoyed it!