I adored this story to all content. Great writing!

Luv from a Mutt.

Cree Summer? Didn't she voice over Susie Carmichael in Rugrats?

Anyway, this is one of your best stories that I've read, and trust me, and I know because I find myself rereading your Yuffentines, you are one of my favorites.

WEll, for one thing, oneesan and onnechan don't exist. they are onee-chan and onee-san. Also, If it meant 'little sister' with -chan on the end, why do ninety percent of NATIVE JAPANESE MANGA KA's use it as an affectionate term for 'older sister'. Here's how it is, one Japanese student to another. Big sis is always onee with an honorific (i.e. -san, -chan, -kun). Little sister is always imouto with an honorific. Case closed. Terribly sorry. Just thought you should maybe know...

PS, why the Hell would a dad call his daughter 'little sister' to begin with?

Whenever I'm on a yuffentine kick I come and read this one at least twice it has to be one of my favorites. It seems like a way they would actually end up together saving each other and building from there.

This is so sweet and lovely, it really cheered me up. Thanks.

Awesome. yes a total smash. You really killed em wit dis one ha ha my lingo sucks i know that but it's fun sometimes. also what's with the random number in the writing?

Actually, Oneechan DOES mean big sister, it's just less formal than Oneesan or Oneesama. Imoto is little sister. Trust me, I've been learning Japanese for... somewhere in the area of six years...? Could be longer. Good story though, definetly a fav of mine.

wow i loved this :) lol

*squeal* great story!! >w

haha,there should be any lemon here...? but oh well,it's fine

Hey, just thought I might drop a review :)
I must say, it was a really enjoyable FF, because I like your style of writing and the flow of the story is very nice.
Somehow at the beginning I had the feeling that I've read something similiar to this FF O.o I don't think it had the same ending though...
and another thing :3 Onee-chan doesn't mean small sister, but big sister! It is used to refer to woman or girls older than oneself, not younger.
Anyway, hope to see more FFs! XD

That was a wonderful story. Great job, and good song ;) Write more, you're fantastic!

AW this was really cute lol I loved it! ^_^

This piece of work was absolutely fantastic. I have to say, that by far, this has got to be your best one yet.

As if we didn't see Vincent 'sacrificing' himself to be Yuffie's husband coming! xD The guy takes everything unto himself and still thinks he's at fault. Geez. xD

I love how you turned a relationship of need into a fairytale ending like this, it was brilliant. Please please keep up the great work!

Hey! I've been reading your work for quite a while now, and I thought that it was about time that I left you a review. I love your work: I think that you are probably one of the most amazing Yuffentine writers that I have read in a long time. You not only keep them both in character, which is so frigging hard to do, but you make the story believable.

Never stop writing, m'dear. :)

~Lynsey Telcontarian
(Tari)