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| Bil 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an absolutely awesome addition to the episode. You captured the characters beautifully and I really *really* enjoyed reading this. I love how you wrote about John's feelings, you really nailed them. And the last two lines are absolutely *brilliant*. I loved how he looked around expecting Elizabeth, it was exactly what would happen. |
| donttouch 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseYay! Yet another good oneshot from a wonderful writer :) I want to kiss you, but I'm not sure I wanna get beaten up by an angry husband :/ So I'll stay with an electronic hug *hugs* |
| Space1Traveler 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseGood whump, good agnst, good story, let's eat! |
| sparklyshimmer2010 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abusecan i cry now? that was god. |
| reyclou 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseLove it, fits in just perfectly. Personally, I half expected John to either fall over and pass out, or double over and start sobbing. After reading this, I'll just assume the camera cut away too early. :) |
| Whirlwind421 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sad! I hate how they got rid of Elizabeth!! I guessed of how they would get rid of her but that was not one of them!! When Sam came on their balcony I screamed at the TV. Great story!! I love it! |
| JackFan2 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I couldn't read this when you first published it. It hurt too much. Watching this season.. things feel so... so off. This story .. I could feel what Sheppard felt. His tight circle of friends growing tighter. Carter and Keller will never ever belong in that circle. They'll be like outsiders; always. This was so great. I'm glad I finally took the time and got up the gumption to read it. It was like the memorial of John's thoughts. And.. HEY .. Speaking of Memorials.. they had one for Carson, why not for Weir? Damnit. Anywho, really well done. You did a nice job with Keller and wow, that meeting between John and Rodney in the hall was just.. heart-twisting and so sweet. Both men hurting. Both men needing comfort and really not knowing how to get it. |
| ditraveler 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI juat loved this thanks for this tag! |
| janib 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseWhat a fantastic story. I do love your work. |
| TheNaggingCube 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseBRAVO! I so agree there seemed to be more to John's mood and this explains it all really well! |
| Dreamer22 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abusevery well done I enjoyed it |
| Ditzyleo 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat tag. I definately thought John looked a little shocked after the landing. Wonderfully written. |
| Kodiak's Sweet Breath 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother absolutely brilliant fic out of you:) |
| Espiritu 2007-10-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat angst! He did look shell-shocked at having to leave Elizabeth behind in that epi. I wish Carter did not intrude on "their" balcony though. |
| Corabe 2007-10-11 ch 1, | abuseSweeties this is heartbreaking and beautiful, wonderful, wonderful job on this one! Perfect. Court |