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Reviews For: Magik Viper

Veil 2007-12-14 ch 7, anon.	abuseHi Lady, I trust all is well w/u and the family. Merry Christmas to U, ur family & love ones, and Happy New Year, if I don't hear from you. I haven't seen U on the game much lately, trust all is well. I know finals, term papers can consume a great amount of time; wishing U all the very best with classes and finals this semester for U. I eagerly await chapters 8+ of the story. Tyron has to understand just how lucky he is that he's just in your story and not a villain in COH, then I would break out Veil and kick his butt myself, for real, lol. well, as always ur creative, descriptive writing style is breathless, and the story leaves me wanting and waiting for more; as it should!! Right! Tyyl. Be well and God Speed to U. Chill! Veil.
crazyace90 2007-11-25 ch 3,	abuseLol im cool (im armies) but im alos a litle crazy but hey that is me i would do exatly that :)
Veil Allegory 2007-10-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseHi Beautiful: Hope U are having a bless and blissful day today. I'm taking a break from study for a Bible study quiz tonight. I'm so in love with this story. I'm hooked, not because i'm growing to know now the person who plays the toon Magik, I'm excited about that very much too, yet this story is very well written. Your descriptive style is breathless, and leaves me rendered in awe as to what's going to happen next. You've captive the very essence of all of our playing styles, attritudes exhibited in the game during mishes and how we really chat to one another. Simply,fabulous,fantastic and amazing. Especially my interaction w/Armies and with you. If ever we could get the exclusive rights from COH to use our characters that we created on our accounts, paying our $15.00/month to do just that, to ourselves, and turned this into a full fledge comic book. This would sell like "HOTT CAKES!". Really, it really would. Female reader could wait each week to find out what going to happen next with Magik, Veil and Armies. The balance of seriousness of Veil, (which is really how I am most of the time in real life anyway; at least so i'm sometimes reminded by those who are on the outside perherial as they are in relationship to me), says and the comic antics of Armies is so so good. "Off The Hook!!" I was sitting here reading and laughing a thousand laughs a minute. great great job. Now, soon some background about Veil and Magik will have to be shed. You've eluded to it already, regarding Veil helping her with the training of her powers and college. If this was a comic right now, your readers would want to know the background love interest between Veil and Vip, cause the atmosphere between them is really thick with the under currents of this, lol. You being a true woman and very much intuitive, would've surely pick this up and wanted more information already. I'm a guy who can sense this tension, though NOT sorted, dirty, nasty, erotic, exotic, senusal or sexsual, it's exits nevertheless, and soon you will have to elaborate on their real relationship. My hat's off to you Lady, which i do use affectionately for both Vip and You yourself!! Great great job. KUDOS! So when is Chapters 4, 5, 6 and so on, and so on going to get posted up? LOL! YEAH!! Just proofread before posting to ensure your work is error free. otherwise, you have a great literary style, very detail, descriptive, very good use of analogies and comparisons, and excellent use of COH game knowledge. Dag!! Vip's bedroon, i thought i entered into a vacation resort spot, i want and need a getaway vacation so bad!!, and the "Get Smart" HQ bedroom ws simply brillant both in detail depiction and, this is key: TIMING is sharing it in the story. AWESOME!, thx much. I just can't waith for the combat stuff now that u have the powers. Veils transfusion power allows him to self heal, and it AOE effect will heals teammates in the area as well, it requires a villan in the area because siphon power drains the villan's power and gives it out as a heal to himself and others thru transfusion. Thx again Lady, much appreciated. ttyl. Hey keep my email cause you can always get me there. Tropo is my "FLAGSHIP" toon in the game and of course my first 50! Hooray! yeah, now i'm celebrating 5 months and couple of weeks of work.

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