Reviews for As You Are Now

Val-Creative 2007-10-19 ch 1,	abuseVery, very nice poem. And, exactly how I think Kurama would see Hiei. ^^ I was attracted to the phrase 'Like living garnet drops of hard mistrust'. Pretty language always gets me. ~ Val
ladyasile 2007-10-15 ch 1,	abuseyou made this so wonderful!! better than shakespear! ^_^ seriously good! :-)
Withdrawn 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. Personally, I've forgotten the proper format for sonnets, but this seems to match it; and, beyond that, it's really very good. You use intelligent language (so intelligent, in fact, that I'm quite sure that several of my fellow high-school senior students wouldn't be able to say, let alone identify, several of those words). You also have a definitely poetic feel to the words, flighty almost. Above all, I loved the final line, it's just really good, and, of course, it does the nice circular thing of bringing everything back to the title. Still, while I praised the intelligence of the language earlier, you might want to be careful that it's not too intelligent. Over all, it's really good.
KyoHana 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abuseSimply lovely! A perfect sonnet from the fox to his fire demon! Shakespeare would be proud.