 C.a.s 3/19/11 . chapter 4 It truely is heart breaking when a great story is cut off and thrown into the trash never to be complete. :( plez save this story from being one of the tousand to be never finished |
 undefined.VallyVAL 7/18/10 . chapter 4I love your naruto stories and although I do favorite I haven't reviewed. So here goes... This story fascinates me. It's a whole new idea and i very much like it. Please don't be so mean as to keep the suspense going for to long. I've tried to find the poll that you have written about on your profile but unfortunately, I can't see it so I'll tell you my opinion here. I believe you should definitely continue with Falling Leaves of Pronto Cho. It's a great story that I believe should not be left unfinished. If you're not getting as many reviews and hits as you like, you should probably update more so that hopefully more and more people will be able to see it on the naruto archive. I hope you read this review soon and make a good decision about continuing or not. |
 uchiha.s 10/23/09 . chapter 4NO WORDS! ONLY GURGLED NOISES! I LOVE YOUR WRITING! |
 uchiha.s 10/23/09 . chapter 3Closing his ebony eyes, he basked in the presence of the eager to please woman, a mask from the depths of his own mind replacing her heavily made up face and used body for a fairer one that he had not seen in years save for high school photographs.
OH. MY. GOD |
 uchiha.s 10/23/09 . chapter 2HAHAHAAHAHA. omg. i love cerise and konohamaru's friendship. it is adorable! i cant wait to read more :P |
 uchiha.s 10/23/09 . chapter 1aw! i liked the little kids holding hands.
adorable chapter. now onto the next one! thundercats HO |
 yuchi1994 10/7/09 . chapter 4update soon! |
 musicmiss18 7/31/09 . chapter 4oops, i had this favorited and never reviewed it...-_-; well this is an awesome story and i can't wait to red the next chapter _ |
 xxikababyxx 10/12/08 . chapter 2i love your story :] like all the rest their lovely :] looking forward to more of your writing |
 numberoneklutz 9/24/08 . chapter 4Great chapter! I'm on edge from the suspense! I can't wait until the trio is reunited again, when the boys find out that Sakura is alive and well. Keep up the good work. :) |
 Luny Ravings of THE Mad Hatter 7/13/08 . chapter 3Why did you stop? |
 backlash symphony 12/28/07 . chapter 3This is beautifully written, with lots of interesting points that make me eager to read more. This is a very paced piece and I enjoy that aspect of it. I don't really have any problems with what you've written (your first chapter mentioned constructive criticism reviews). The only thing I can really think of isn't a problem you've made, rather an issue the website needs to fix as it occurs in every single piece I've written and read, as well. Some of the words that are italicized stick to the word before it, but like I said, it's generally FF's fault. So anyways, continue with this wonderful piece. I look forward to reading more of it. Till later!
Backlash Symphony |
 pinwheels 11/4/07 . chapter 3 love this story. please keep it up. :} |
 numberoneklutz 10/28/07 . chapter 3I really enjoyed the allusions you made to Sakura with both Naruto and Sasuke...at least I hope it's Sakura. I love the bit you included about Itachi and his 'soulmate', I found it hilarious. Killer chapter, I hope to read more soon. |
 numberoneklutz 10/22/07 . chapter 2Once again an awesome chapter. These omniscent phrases at the end of your chapters are driving me insane! It make my insatiable curiosity go up another notch. Update soon. |