So far, so good. I like how clear you make everything look. I read some of the review and I don't understand why one of them did not know how Rain knew who Atlanta was. She is a fallen star, therefore she has seen Atlanta from her place in tha sky. Why she fell is a better question, but not one that I expect to be answered in the story as Rain herself probably does not know. In other words I think you are doing a good job, and I am looking forward to reading more.

Remind me again-why are they so obsessed with Ari and Chase?

That's a little creepy.

PLEASE UPDATE!

PLEASE UPDATE! I hate waiting especially for something I like.

Hey. I love the story so far bu you have got to update soon PLEASE! *get's down on knees and begs with shinny puppy eyes*

I loved these books! You did a good job writing!

Awesome but it has been so long, that I've forgotten what the story was about. You should update sooner.

Great prologue and description. It felt as if I was reading the book itself. Although, I think you should explain how Aelarain knew who the Dreamspeaker was...they never have met, have they?

Hey,

I really like the images that you showed here. I really hope you write more chapiters-I'd love to know what happens next.

I liked it. I like books about magic and mystery. I can't wait to see what mischeif goes on.

I didn't know that anyone else was such a fan of The Unicorns of Balinor! I can't believe it. I love it. you should write more!

Please write more - I would really like to know what happens!