i like it, short and sweet

Aww, that was good. I liked it, very nice to have Rukia drop her tough act.

i like it

It IS a good sort of inspiration :P I loved this IchiXRuki piece, so subtle yet so nice. Keep up the good work!

Aww! Congratulations on writing your first fic! That is so awesome! I was terrified when I wrote my first one. But... yours is so good! I really enjoyed reading it. Your writing was smooth and the story was well-told. I very much liked the final line! Keep up the amazing writing.

-Alaena

Definitely worth a review. You have a really nice writing style. Thanks for the nice story!

vio