Great fight between them in this chapter.

Damn nice story so far.

Can't wait to read more ^^ now how are Hinata and Anko gonna fight over Naruto?

I guess I'll just have to wait XD

Hmm, I saw a few grammar mistakes here and there. Almost no spelling ones.

~Snipa

update your stories more often please. they are great and i want to know what will happen next.

lolz loved the southpark reference

lol,poor naruto,it looks like the next chapter will be hectic, wonder what will happen. Nice chapter :)
ja ne

eh, didn't care too much for it, but the silly was good

All in all I find this to be a pretty good story.

I will say that I've never been one to bash on Kakashi, but I'll let it slide for this story. I think the most interesting part of the story is this connection you've managed to forge between Hanzo and Naruto. Naruto having the Salamander contract is something I don't think I've seen before. I would like to see this connection develop more as the story continues.

I am also interested in the truth behind Uzu no Kuni and Madaras plot

I love the story about the Rikudo Sennin and his three sons. Is it canon? No, but it's still damn interesting.

I love Naruto having developed his own jutsu, but with that being said, I think you need to develop more on that. He has the rasengan now, so have him re-invent that. Maybe do something else completely original, but I think this needs to be something that happens continually throughout the story.

I love the little rivalry between Anko and Hinata. It makes them both feel different while still being familiar in so many other senses.

I'd like to see Naruto interact with Konohamaru a bit more. They obviously know each other, but you never really explained how. Is it the same as canon? Or was their initial encounter much earlier on? I know it's not important, but I like to know these kinds of things.

And finally, I must now play devil's advocate in saying that Kakashi is not nearly as bad as a see him so often portrayed. It's true he favored Sasuke alot, but that had to do with his own past more then some biased he had against Naruto. When he saw Sasuke, he saw himself at that age. He wanted to help Sasuke, fearing that history might repeat itself otherwise. Sadly it did anyway, it just wasn't his history.

But anyway, he does and has always had faith in Naruto's ability to succeed. He was even the first to tell him that he had what it took to surpass the Yondaime.

And I know that this hasn't really been added to the story yet, but I will say that Kakashi never held back on the shadow clone training with Naruto. If you remember it was something that he pretty much made up on the spot. Before Naruto it had never even been tried before so he had no reason to even think of such a thing off the top of his head. So stop writing it in fics saying that Kakashi and/or Jiraiya were either incompetent or holding back on Naruto, because neither of those is the case.

Sorry, I just had to get that out of my system.

PIE

Multi- way title match for the privelage of dating Naruto-kun! Awesome story, this is the shiznit! There were a few inconsistencies, but as a whole this rocked. I think a little more time for Naruto-kun and Haku's relationship devloping wazs necessary but not too bad. Thanks so much for the great story, ja!

nice chapter. can't wait for the next. hope you update soon

Impresive!I like the originality of this story. The humour in it is gd and i like the way naruto stood out with his romance problems. However, i wld hav prefer tt naruto wld be able to summon toads as well since tt wld giv him the sage mode. Maybe u cld let him summon multiple creatures or there is a power like the sage mode but more powerful tt hs salamanders cld teach him like...tts for u to decide. Keep it up!!

great chapter, i just got around to reading it today. if you didn't like the sakura confession scene, i would recommend you read a story that goes by the name of 'Why Kakashi Should Never Read Out Loud', or something along those lines. search for it. the author has written a lot of one-shot cracks. look up sakura's confession, it is pretty funny. Later.

Your doing great on this, although I wish you would add more to Bloody Fox, (can't wait till Konoha finds out what Kumo is up to). I have a suggestion; What do think of Naruto's Uncle, Haku's father still being alive and is like a Mist-version of Danzo?

I find it amusing that your short little Saw dream-sequences are usually better than the last four movies...

Isn't Shukaku's Fūton: Renkūdan like 80 times the size of Naruto's Sempuken? And demon powered? Eh, If you say so.

... It's not exactly Naruto's fault they both made a move on him the same day, Yet their going to blame him aren't they?

Ah, women.

..::(-)::..

Overall, a really good chapter

The fight was not bad and it had some good laughs

There are however some spelling and grammar errors but nothing to bad. it is a little to short compared to some of the older chapter but that doesn't hurt this to much.


keep up the good

update soon