Congratulations, you've mixed the TV show with the books in a coherent and nice way. Mazel Tov, and just so you know, I think I love you for it. *laugh*

It's a great story - written in Harry Dresden's IC voice, and... I lke the plot. :D Geez, I like everything and I think it's awesome *gives up on coherent - erm, helpful? - statements* and... you know, AWESOME! I like. A lot. xD

-Jaeh xD

Alright, so I was wrong. Her name WAS Connie on the TV show. How...UnMurphyIsh.

I was doing alright until the author changed Murphy's name to "Connie". WTF? I don't even think her name was changed in the TV show, so where the hell did that come from?

Wow. Just... wow.

Your Harry is brilliant!

I can't believe how perfectly you've managed to blend the book 'verse and the tv 'verse together, while keeping it all in the writing style.

This is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read in... well, years, which (for the volume I read) is saying something.

Fantastic.

Great fic! Like the 42. I have like 3 shirts and a towel that just have "42" on them. Not many people get it, but maybe they just know the correct question so it's good that they don't know the answer. Great fic. I think I'm going to start reading the books again, if I budget the time right I'll be just in time for the next book.

Aw, Harry's poor again. *sigh*

Loved this story! It's like reading a Dresden Files mini-book! :) You're such a great writer and you're constantly making me laugh!

Lol! Love the Sid says "slap"! Great!

Very much liked Ms. Sharp's saving the world explanation. Very sweet.

Mai looked as though she wanted to eat me.
*ponders* Yea. I can see that. :)

Mai broke out her angry demon face and he cracked.
*continues pondering* Sounds about right.

“I’m sorry, sir.”
“What are you apologizing for, now?”
“It’s preemptive,” I explained. “I’m about to pass out on you.”
Quite Harry-like.

Great chapter! I love the explanation for everything that was going on, putting all the pieces together. You did it very well. That's something I usually have trouble with -- coming up with a plotline that makes sense and develops well and at the same time having it be complex.

“Ramirez. Carlos. Cavalry.”
“Dresden, Harry,” I returned. “Dead man walking."
Very Harry.

I like the part with the slight communication between Bob and Harry, understanding that if Harry did die, Bob would be shoved in the back of a closet somewhere to go insane.

“You got a license for that sword?” A cop, even in death. :)

“Hi,” I said. She burst into tears. I am awesome with kids.
Lol! Poor Harry!

“Can I borrow some stupid from tomorrow?” I asked.
I think I'll use that line with my mother sometime. :)

Oh **! Morgan! So not good!!

Love the pigtails comment and 'not a wimp'. I totally LOVE Murphy, she's a great character!

Yea, it's never good when the people start recognizing you on your visits to the hospital.

Love Anna! Lol! So great! 'mental note to buy Anna a pony' -- I agree!

"“Connie’s sick,” he said.
To which I sensibly replied, “**!”"
LOL!

"You're my new Murphy." Definitely a Dresden line.