is this the end? thats not very nice! :( tear)

she carved the car , the tool of the trade. (mouth drops open) she deserved the frying pan beating she got. too bad she didn't get buried in the ditch or a really long well.

for that comment evelyn made about will ebing wild in the sheets. another giggle i might add , i would have blinded the bitch ,i'm voting for teenie to bury her in a ditch somewhere. one can hope right ?

teenie and the phone was just.. there are no words to describe it. wait thee is ,you mentioned the shrink your family was going to get you for the cackling well right bout now my roomate is seriously considering calling the dean.. ;)

i would be ery afraid of the games athena wants to play with evelny.. very afraid.

whoa.. evelyn talkin in they's and we's was just little freaky !!

"He was fairly sure he was the first guy to ever wish a hottie with a body like hers would put some damn clothes on"

hehe , i can see what D. says about will but i have to admit I'm all Dean all the way.

Dean and Autumn getting the talk about marriage made me grin. my poor, poor Dean he is going to get deprived.

oh ghost town? wicked!

My favorite chapter so far.. Athena and Will made me smile and squel.. I adore them.. really I do..


Favorite Qoute fro the chapter:

Well you’re not bad but certainly not Sam either,” she grinned. “I like my puppies squishy.”

“You’re a freaky midget, you know that?” Will asked brushing past her to follow Athena. Darcy only cackled like a cartoon witch before skipping past him down the hall. Teenie had managed to get the back door open and they slipped back to the Mustang waiting them.

*SNORT**

Anyway.. I completely adored it.. :)


Happy Holidays !!

D.

Squee ! It made me so happy to see this in my mailbox.. I've been dying for you to update ! :)

Happy...Happy... :)

Ha ! Evelyn signed her life away when she scrathed into the car, she is so so lukcy Autumn wasn't there.. She wouldn't of cared if she was human or not.



Anyway... You had so many funny lines.. It was hard to pick out my favorites.. But here ya go:

“You read up on the town’s history?” Sam sputtered.

“It was in the information Jen gave us,” he shrugged. “I can do this on my own you know. I just don’t like all the research crap.”

“More like you’re too lazy,” Autumn teased patting Dean on the head.

(Giggle!)


“Son, you can have my left nut if it will get rid of those spirits.” Mr. Maverick chuckled.

“Hope we don’t have to go that far,” Dean and Sam both winced at the thought. Autumn struggled not to roll her eyes at the boys.

(Now that was just good... I can so picture that !)


Favorite line ever : “Think my voice is good wait till you see what its wrapped in,” she teased looking for what the door was wired too.


So perfect.. I adore Teenie and Will.. (Adore , Adore!!)


And finally... I cant find the extact line but Sam thinking about Brenda wooden spoon of chastiy that just cracked me up !!


:)


Well , since this review is becoming more like a story .. I'll leave it at that and hope you update soon!!


D.

Me, an insane genius? I have *no* idea what you're talking about... -innocent whistle as she pokes her new stories- Hehehe. Crack!Fics are making me excited, who knew I had so many bunnies running around my room (even ones with red and brown hair).

I loved the entire as you well know:
Me: "What? Why haven't you updated? Are you done yet? Gimme fic, GIMME FIC NOW!!" -grabby hands- I can be so demanding sometimes, but I updated 4 times in two days so go me!

Err, I'll point out the highlights shall I?
"You read up on the town’s history?” Sam sputtered.-Hee, poor Sam.
Sam answered chewing his lip the wheels in his pretty little head turning.

Gahh... So sorry that it took me so long to review , Criminal Minds Fandom as been calling to like a stinky little siren.. :)

Anyway .. on to the review.. My poor Will... :( ... Athena go and kick some Evelyn ass !

The ending made me crack up laughing... I mean whats better than Brenda with her lethal wooden spoon and a smoothie deprived Dean !

Alright anyway , awesome chapter.. I hope you update soon..


D.

Gah ! Sorry it took so freakin long to review , the college's cyber lounge thing was closed.. :( But anyway , it made my day to see your story sitting in my inbox ! It was step one in my relaxation program.. (Midterms ended)


Anyway , fricken brillant chapter... The first part with Teenie and the phone..

How was I supposed to know the kid was emo?” Teenie asked. Darcy massaged her temples eyes closed.

“Teenie, honey, you grilled the child. He’s never going to look at a phone again without having a breakdown.” she folded her legs under her on the bed and John nestled his head in her lap as they sat across from Teenie who was sprawled out on her bed.

“I just asked if he knew anyone named Lyn Chase,” the blonde defended herself feebly.

“No, you sounded like you were going to come through the phone and kill him. ‘Do you know anyone named Lyn Chase? What do you mean you’re not sure. How can you not be sure about that. Do you have problems remembering names? Is there something wrong with you?’


**Snort* That part just made me crack up... "Is there something wrong with you?" Perfecto !



And the end , how freakin evil of you !

"She was on her feet marching toward the door not even looking before she crossed the street. Not the smartest thing she thought looking back after the screech of tires."

GO TEENIE ! YOU GET YOUR MAN !


ahem .. looks around at all the people staring at the crazy american girl.. my bad !!


Okay , this review is beyond long so I'm going to end but not without saying

Awesome ! and update as soon as you freakin can !!


D.

Great chapter, this story just keeps gettin better cant wait for the next chapter

“I know, Teenie, he’s your guy. Nothing more needs said.”

“He’s NOT my guy. Will and I are just friends. Hardly even that. A hundred years ago we dated but that’s long since over now.”

“So you keep saying but the fact that you want to rip this girl,” she tapped the hauntingly real drawing, “apart limb from limb makes me think otherwise.”


YAY ! And.. I can't believe I'm saying this... I can't wait until you let Teenie beat the shit out of Evelyn.. :)


Anyway , again with my most overused word of the week.. Awesome ! Chapter !!

Can't wait for an update...



D.

yay new story, great start, cant wait for the rest.