Geez, this is heartbreaking, it really is. I can feel that heartsickness, and although (or maybe because) it's not my favourite thing to feel, I truly find this story wonderful.
Very well done.

...Soliloquy is a great title, but I really think it should be called "It should have been me."

CRAZY.

Didn't expect it. ;) Great story.

You write well, and you can get better; so keep at it.
I don’t like angst; partly because it really does needs to be well written to be bearable; there can not be a brake in flow, ever, it throws everyone off—no matter what you’re writing—. Also it can easily—all too easily—seem whiny, thus irritating and unimportant to the reader. You did really well; I’m impressed.
Although that’s all well and good; what I find truly amazing is you compressed so much into such a small space; it was awesome! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. However, there was a brake in flow, near the beginning, you might want to read over it again and see if you find it.

That is the sweetest, most well-written and depressing Daiken fanfic I have ever read.

This is lovely, in a sad, lonely sort of way. It makes *me* sad to read; you did a good job of evoking Ken's emotions in this fic, especially with the very last line.

Th-That was so SAD! But I LOVED it. Poor ken... T.T

That is so sad, and... I hated it. And I loved it.
Thank you for writing!

Aw, that was quite lovely. In a sort of despairing way.

I loved it. So touching. In fact, I'm faving it.

It read very smoothly and I thought the characterization was fantastically true to their respective characters.

Marvelous job.

I loved it!!Even if I almost cried at the end.Almost.

Okay, I suddenly realized how deep and desperate this was when I read the last sentence. I could probably seriously nitpick this and find all this symbolism crap (that you might not even had written with in mind) and start crying. It's so sad ;_; I support both Kensuke and Takari, and to see it all fall apart even when Daisuke is clearly happy is just so sad TT_TT I like how you shrouded the OC in mystery, so no one can really yell "MARY-SUE!" (I'm seriously not getting mary-sue vibes from this girl, even though I feel like I should). You win.

Oh wow, that's so sad. It's awesome!

Wow Awesome I totally love it >.< oh Ken-chan ..!

I remember when I was reading this at your house I was like "Whoa, this is amazing!" and it is ;]]. Good job!

Ah. Poor Ken. Didn't see that coming (I totally forgot about the summary and didn't read the notes that come before the story).

Wow. THis was so awesome!

-AbnoxiousBlonde