W-O-W.
I really like it in so many ways! :D
The fight was really well constructed and written in a realistic way. Moreover you managed to keep a pathos and a tension. You succeeded in not making the reader understand immediately what's really going on. You depicted Mikey in a way that you can actually believe IS Leo but inserted some hints about is really identity. When he is about to cry and especcially when he says he's the fastest. At that point I was wondering "but that wasn't Mikey?" and finally when he says that usually when people use his name it's because in trouble I felt a little lost but then I understood! XD
I admit that at first when I read "It seems so unreal that my brother, my strong brother, is lying unconscious and wounded at my feet." I thought that was Raph the wounded one.
I really liked how you showed how Mikey is strong and determined!
It's unusual to see a Mikey who sheds blood. But I TOTALLY like it, because - hey - he's a ninja too, he's not so childish how is usually depicted by most of the fanwriters!
Compliments and sorry if I made mistakes, English is not my first language :)

That was so cool! I really didn't expect it to be Mikey, even though I got a little suspicious when he said "My strong brother". I banashed that statement, however, when he tied the blue mask around his face and unsheathed the katanas (although he seemed a little awkward with the weight of them and the straps). Very cleverly written! I loved it! Well done! Brilliant!

I did a double take when I got to the mask part. A surprising plot twist.

O.O I thought Mikey was the one hurt. That was hilarious, it being Mikey who was being Leo. ^^

All I can say is: That was AWESOME!
I'm really glad Miles3 told me about this, I love it!
Keep up the good work,
Watcher

Wow, when I saw the title of this story, I thought that it would be about Leo. lol But I liked how it turned out to be Mikey telling the story. Anyway, awesome job! :D

Thanks for the great read,
-M3

This is the BEST Leo & Mikey story that I have ever read! I dearly loved that part where Leo asked Mikey why was he wearing his blue mask (:)(:) Thank you SO MUCH for helping me to feel good...

Sincerely,
Leo Oneal

i kinda knew it was mikey, but when the fight came up i was like, no it's leo. and yeah, when mikey gets serious he is a little like leo isn't he?

wow! awesome. Seriously tricked me

awesome, i was totally thrown for a loop when I heard him ask "Mikey?" I was like...wait a second, huh?! lol Great! simply that.

Aw, that was sweet. It really did turn out well as a Leo/Mikey fic. A very enjoyable read.

This was pretty interesting. I like Leo, and you're probably right. They all do have a little bit of him in them, especailly Raph. Great job on this. ;)

Wow, this was really well done--it took me a while to figure out what was going on.

Thanks for writing!

~Hj

omg i loved it! amazing- i had no idea that mikey had switched with leo-maybe i'm not that perceptive...but it kept me guessing!
totally one of my favs :D great work!

Hehe, I actually figured it out before the end! Lemme tell ya, doesn't happen too often! Wonderful story! A couple lines caught my attention... 'So you're the might Blue' 'Looks like it, huh?' and 'Why're you wearin my mask?' 'Just borrowing a bit of your infamy, bro.'... Awesome lines! Thanks so much for writing! :)