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Animelover1002
2009-07-11 . chapter 2
Its great so far! Please continue soon!
Shadowed Knight
2009-04-14 . chapter 2
Wow...Bakura raping Mokuba has never been so...smexy. You should continue this story it has the potencial to be seriously amazing.
None
2009-03-04 . chapter 2
I'm loving this story so far, I hope you finish it. (:
Kiri-chan220
2009-02-19 . chapter 2
lol
moocow33
2008-10-20 . chapter 2
man you have so many good stories (like this one and that bakura starts dating) which you leave us waiting and pining after.

i know you dont intend to do so (writters blocks and all aswell as computer failure) i just cant wait until you release a flourish of updates for any of your fics

anyway admire and love your work; cant wait for more i guess
see MISARCHIST
2008-10-02 . chapter 2
I have always liked this pairing. You write it well.

I like the slow pace, the mood, and the finesse of your writing. You have this sort of ... elegance in the ring spirit's POV that is really pleasing to read. I'm definitely excited for the third chapter, and I hope you get past the block you have on it.
chibi heishi
2008-06-05 . chapter 2
lol. This is good. I can tell it's going to be pretty funny in places. I almost feel bad for both of the guys - they're going to drive each other insane. ...Not that it's a long drive...
blonde-de-nuit
2008-05-27 . chapter 2
Please update soon! The story is really great!^.^
Juice Junky
2008-05-07 . chapter 2
Is there going to be a lemon!?! You have to update soon!
Roen
2008-01-31 . chapter 2
I'm stupidly upset that this isn't a Bakura/Mokuba fic...

Personally I don't like Seto/Bakura stuff but I have to say that your fics of them are the only ones that have ever come close to persuading me otherwise. Still though...Bakura/Mokuba...it's not even a fic of them and it has to be the hottest thing of them I have ever read. -sighs and is jealous of your skillz-

I love all of your fics.
flamethrowerqueen
2008-01-28 . chapter 2
Hooray for updates! God, do I love this fic! I was wide-eyed and breathing heavily throughout, especially after going back and reading chapter 1 to refresh my memory. You have the most interesting story lines, and the actions and characterization to back it up. It's always an experience, and a good experience at that.
Jadelioness
2008-01-28 . chapter 2
Ooh, that was an exciting chapter! I really like how the plot is going and I eagerly await to see where it goes.
Lolita Lilyette
2008-01-28 . chapter 2
I actually got up and DANCED when I checked my mail and it said Koneko Cain had an update! xB WHE!
Kilauea
2008-01-28 . chapter 2
I hate myself, but I keep having to stomp on memories of that movie, Biodome. It was so bad! Also, I keep trying to imagine Bakura feeding chickens every morning and it keeps turning into Bakura chasing chickens with a circular saw.
M violence.
WinButler
2008-01-28 . chapter 2
Yeah you updated. Nice.
I'm intrigued by the Kura/Mokuba, it's interesting indeed...I like it.
Good line - "his personality makes most people want to throw him in front of a train". Probably true for me too, but he wouldn't be Kaiba if he wasn't irritating as hell.
Damnit, you've just made me realise I actually miss Yu Gi Oh. I'm gonna have to watch it tonight, even if it is the crappy dub version.
By the way, I read something of yours on lj. To do with a slave auction and a seriously twisted Kaiba? Forgot to comment at the time, but may I just say - awesome.
Laura
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