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White Replica
2009-12-14 . chapter 21
Oh, what a happy, wonderful, and downright AMAZING story!

The story was AWESOME, to begin with. You started out with an amazing beginning, a kick-** middle, and of course, a fluffy sweet ending :D I loved it.

I actually found this story about half a year ago, and so I squeed. When I made my account, I started looking for this story, and YES, I found it, and I LOVE it still.

Even if I feel really sorry for Sirius, there's gotta be drama and some negativity in a good story, right? Not all happy endings and happily ever afters.

Anyway, LOVE the story, please write more of your amazing work!

~White
icybluegoddessfarie
2009-10-13 . chapter 21
I loved it! I think you did a fantastic job at mixing the concepts of Star Wars, Star Trek, and the Wizards Worlds together. I also love your muse, because he sounds like a terror and a riot to work with. I just wanted to question why Harry was so adament about not telling who he was to Draco because he didn't want Draco to see the Price and not him. It was obvious from the beginning that Draco did not want to be married to the Prince and wanted to find his soulmate throught the Stone. Why would Harry take it that far? Just wondering. Loved the story in any case.

Best Wishes,

IcyBlue
Addictedreader09
2009-02-01 . chapter 5
STAR WARS LOL love this story!
I Forget
2009-01-18 . chapter 21
WARNING TO READERS: This review contains spoilers.



Constructive comments: Just wanted to get this one out of the way before I forget the details (I earned my pen name, lol)In this chapter, Harry was shocked to learn of Draco's pregnancy, due to his gender. However, in chapter 12 or 13, Seamous and Colin became pregnant, and Harry's reaction indicated that male pregnancy was natural.

Also, I find that it took so long for Draco to GET pregnant for the first time a bit... odd. =\

You're very good at writing conversations. I never once lost track of who was saying what when, and the emotions they were portraying were clear through the whole story. Very well done. Thank you. =)
AnimeMandi22
2009-01-09 . chapter 21
That was bloody amazing! I loved every singel thing about it!
AnimeMandi22
2009-01-09 . chapter 5
it's sevy isn't it! heheh! I love this!
AnimeMandi22
2009-01-09 . chapter 3
omg that was great yet again! Harry's the prince isn't he?
AnimeMandi22
2009-01-09 . chapter 2
omg that was great but who't the prince of gryffindor?
AnimeMandi22
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
omg this sounds amazing i can't wait to read it!
Serenity Smiles
2009-01-01 . chapter 21
This story has kept me up way too long... But what are some hours of missed sleep in comparison to such an entertaining read? It was so much fun, and I can't help wondering wether I have read one of your stories before... Must check at once!... Or better wait until tommorow ;) Anyway, thank you for writing this!
minoki
2008-12-01 . chapter 21
oh wow you finished...congrats, sorry haven't been on lately so yeah. Great job!! ^_^
evildictionaryninja
2008-11-30 . chapter 21
That was definitely a happy ending if not a little unexpected, well the last part.

Thanks for the story!
CrayonsPink
2008-11-29 . chapter 21
Great story! I loved it!
cardfreak
2008-11-28 . chapter 21
Great Ending :D Good to see you wrote a Cheesy ending lol. It made me go AW...
slashslut
2008-11-28 . chapter 21
this made me feel all warm and squishy on the inside:)
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