you displayed the emotions very well! there are two things, however: the paragraph "he had been wrong..." is a little bit confusing and thus takes away from the emotional impact. secondly, Wilson saying "man" in the last sentence is informal and a bit out of character.

but otherwise, great job =)

OMG! This is so good, exactly the sort of thing I had imagined House's death to be like to Wilson. Thank you so much for letting me know about this. I had been intending to write an aftermath to 'Immune to Death' myself, but I was never in a dark enough mood, or had the time to do it myself with the other fics I'm writing. Having said that, I'm glad you wrote this, you've done a much better job of it than I think I ever could.
And finally, thank you so much for writing this in response to my fic, it's very flattering. So glad to see I inspire people *lol* anyhoo, keep up the great work.

wahh!! this was good, and I mean, if you think about it, likely... the line
A statement that would survive forever- if only to prove House wrong.

was great. good job!

wow... that's so introspective...