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Nenne
2009-08-28 . chapter 12
Thank you again for another wonderful story. I can't really find the words to describe how much it touched me. Never stop writing!
Nenne
2009-08-28 . chapter 5
I'm crying. Really. This is so sad. You must not stop writing ever. You are so talented.
XquidditchxbeaterX
2009-08-17 . chapter 12
I just finished reading this story, and omg, I am soo glad i read this!!Brilliant, Volunteers were amazing just be themselves, and then you doing a sequel, it's really appreciated. I would have totally reviewed all of the chapters, but I was soo impatient to devour the next chapter, that well, I just couldn't waste any time.
I cried and laughed with this story(not many stories affect me so much that water works start, but this sure did).Draco's trails, Ben's confusion, Harry almost losing Alec (I'm sure forgetting quite a few more)-so sad.But then there were such tender moments where i just wanted to hold some of the characters, especially the kids.Beautifully written.I could totally feel the characters emotions and the atmosphere.Well paced, totally in character, I don't think I've found anything disagreeable with this story.Once again, brilliantly done.I loved how everthing resolved.I had a lot more to say, but I kinda forgot them, since there were so many.Thank you soo much for writing something soo fantastic.
Raeshi
2009-08-07 . chapter 17
WOW!! Great story I love it. I hope you update it soon.
ryencoke
2009-06-11 . chapter 13
I love little Alec and Ben. There are two scenes I would like to see.

First I would love to have Alec and Ben pull a prank that Michelle gets blamed for. Don't know if you meant for us to really dislike Michelle but personally I think you managed to create quite the little bitch...that's a compliment to you by the way

Second scene would be something along the line of Alec being upset because he just can't do magic as well as everyone else but then discovering by accident he is actually quite powerful but it's like song magic or something, perhaps healing or illusion or something. And in the same scene have Ben not be jealous at all but like a totally loving caring brother. Your scene for their sorting was SO wonderful, I just want to see more of the little duo.
My Secret Pleasure
2009-03-22 . chapter 17
Wow, that was an intense fight. You would think that Anne would be able to sympathize more with Draco, seeing as they come from similar backgrounds. But obviously not. I feel bad for Fred -- Anne was horrible. But it was great writing!
Tinuviel Simbelmyne
2009-03-21 . chapter 17
Such a relationship can't be good.. poor kids, I can understand them.
See ya!
Euge
thrnbrooke
2009-03-20 . chapter 17
Makes me want to smack them both! Fred is wrong but his wife... Oh now that one... *argh*
Frayach ni Cuill
2008-12-05 . chapter 16
Hee! Just got around to reading this - I love DVD extras :) Thank you for the glimpse into the future - oh and Franklin Delano :D
My Secret Pleasure
2008-11-19 . chapter 16
Great chapter! I do wish that the boys had gone to Gryffindor, but Hufflepuff is a good choice for them too. It's sweet that they want to be together.
Fmh
2008-11-14 . chapter 16
Great chapter thank you I love this little family thank you for adding to your story
Squibakou
2008-11-12 . chapter 16
W00t! Adorable stuff, loved that they were all put in hufflepuff, and this line made me choke on my tea: 'The Hat has finally gone senile'. Lol.
jennifer snape
2008-11-12 . chapter 16
Oh how heartwarming!
dracosoftie
2008-11-11 . chapter 16
Thanks for giving us more DVD extras to Ember to Ember! I loved the glimpse of the boys' sorting and Harry and Draco's reaction to it. It leaves me hungry for more ... *leaves to go re-read Volunteers again*
thrnbrooke
2008-11-11 . chapter 16
Oh that was perfect! Silly boys! They could have been Gryffindors! But they'll do fine in Hufflepuff!
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