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| OuroborosSnyder 2008-07-28 ch 3,  | abuseLove it! ~Snyder~ |
| Tommys My 21 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseaw! loved that |
| The Confused One 2007-11-08 ch 3, | abuseOMG! Wow. This story is powerful. Poor Bobby and Alex. SO SO much pain. So much horrible pain. They really are both still hurting a lot. A lot of wounds, past and present, have been opened this past year. I miss the way they were...before. They used to enjoy their work, laugh, and have fun. They hardly ever have fun anymore. I wish...hope that side of both of them will come back soon. :) Anyway, this was fabulous. I really love it. You do such amazing B/A. LOL |
| deliriousdancer 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseThey certainly took the rough road but once they started talking they cleared up a lot of confusion. Interesting that while they were apologizing, they were also confessing that it was a real turn on. I am glad Bobby was finally able to unload that horrible Brady secret he has been carrying. Bobby and Alex, mixed up crazy kids! |
| YaneDirnt20 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseT.T that was beautiful man...I really liked it a lot! great job! T.T |
| Metisse 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abuseNice! I love happy endings. :-) |
| sky m 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abusegreat finish, thank you for making them talk and listen to each other... |
| rindy713 2007-10-17 ch 3, | abusewhew, what a ride! there was a lot of emotion packed into this one, and a lot of violence between bobby and alex that caught me off guard. i think you pulled it off, getting them to a place where they can make it work. all the honesty helped. this was a courageous project. congratulations! |
| rindy713 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abusewhat an incredibly scary, powerful chapter! i really hope they can overcome their fear and pain and guilt and appreciate the deep connection they have made. i wonder how they are going to bring this back to the positive side. i'm counting on you to pull it off! |
| Secret Phoenix 679 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abuseWowa! Cant wait to read more ;) |
| Caia 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abuseDamn! Pat, you were born for this. |
| C.I.TigerFan 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abuseWonderful! |
| Canmar 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abuseOh my God Patcat...what angst! I can't wait to see how they mend this situation... |
| Metisse 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abuseThat was intense! These two really need to communicate better for all their telepathy. Hope they manage to work this out and get rid of all that angst! |
| sky m 2007-10-16 ch 2, | abuseThis is great, intense dark and something I could actually think in character, hope you update soon! |