 Armads the Doom Bringer 2009-08-26 . chapter 14Wow this really is a good story. I have to say it's been a while since i've seen a story that delved so deeply into the emotions of each person. For you're first non-oneshot story it was a great read. I'll have to read some of your other ones.
On to constructive critizims. Hm almost completly spelling error free, although i did see one or two times where you had a capitalization error. Hmm other than those one or two times you were basically perfect. Bravo! |
 Amagake 2009-06-26 . chapter 14I love this story so much. I have this thing about love stories (as in that's all I ever read on ) and this is definatly one of my favorites. Everybodies in charecter and it's really well written. A+! |
 xzotic 2009-05-14 . chapter 14*Squeal!* I am so happy that I found this story and your other ones. You have some very good Ukyo/Ryoga plots. Despite the occasional grammar blips (like say specially instead of especially - confused me for like 5 seconds the first time) your stories are so addictive! Honestly, great ideas, keep up the great work! |
 zetachan 2008-11-26 . chapter 14Nice story!! I enjoyed its reading.
The right humor the right amount of drama, consistent plot and its development [I think it was a bit rush when Ryoga gets jealous after Ukyo puts herself between Ranma and him but, they are martial artist and one of them with amnesia problem! What can I say!!;)]
I hope you grant us a new story as good as this one really soon. Thank you again, this is really good. |
 Frog-kun 2008-11-04 . chapter 14ah happy ending. Nice. |
 Frog-kun 2008-11-03 . chapter 12This is exactly like your average romance only substitute the names Ukyo and Ryoga. Lol. |
 Frog-kun 2008-11-03 . chapter 9Wow, I really like this story a lot. |
 Frog-kun 2008-11-03 . chapter 6Poor Ucchan. |
 Frog-kun 2008-11-03 . chapter 3Hm... not bad. |
 bydneley 2008-11-03 . chapter 14I really enjoyed your story, big fan of Ukyo/Ryoga here. Few errors in some phrases but ya know nothing to worry about they don't really bring down the level of your fic. Pls do make more when you can. ^_^ |
 HereticalRebel 2008-10-26 . chapter 14 wah! ~sniff~ i like it so much! make another one! please oh please oh please oh please! i cried when i was reading the... uhm.. the part where ryoga came to ukyo.. wah! its so good! |
 Hat O' Doom 2008-10-02 . chapter 14Touching story. Good job |
 Riffer Kyle 2008-10-01 . chapter 3Chapter 4 won't load. 8(
I am said. |
 count-zechs00 2008-09-30 . chapter 14Greats story! I love Ryoga/Ukyo fics, they go good together like peanut butter and chocolate! I'm a huge Ryoga fan but I gotta say if I were Ranma, I would've just beaten them up and and tossed them inside a room together(with a heavily reinforced structure good enough to withstand a Shi Shi Hokodan).
An interesting ending but I really don't think that their measure of trust should be based upon having sex. Just my two cents worth. |
 The Azure Penguin 2008-09-22 . chapter 14My GOSH! This...this is one of the loveliest Ry/Uk stories out there. It will definitely be missed. :'( |