Hey, just felt the need to rant, since the fanfiction is great and left quite the impression on me.

ONE I want to say that you have an amazing style especially when it comes to describing sensations. Really! I've never seen another sex scene with better description (means the first lemon in the warehouse, not that others aren't just as great, but that is the one that made most impact). You make the reader remember some of those feelings and relive them... I am really amazed. *bows in respect*.
TWO can I thank you that you didn't write a lemon with Yuki in this story (Dunno about your other stories but I'll check them out after the review XD needs more Kaname/Zero!) I mean it's not that I don't like her or anything, simply I have the need to read about the yaoi pairing. Yuki is actually one of the few bearable and likable female characters out there, but I can really hate her when she gets in the way between Kaname and Zero.
Which leads me to point THREE, I don't really know of any three-way relationships that work (other than a threesome) But I don't really think that that would be the case here... So yeah involving Yuki in the relationship was the thing that I didn't like it.
Yeah I need to stop ranting, but that it my honest opinion, but that may be just me looking for pure yaoi XD Ok really stopping now...

~Shana

Wow this was long :)

There were a few things that sided tracked me along the way. "desert" instead of 'dessert' or "love-loss" instead of 'love lost'

And of course the huge divergence from canon but I thought it was good. Lacking the expected threesome but good.

Thanks :)

I absolutely love your fanfictions!
Although a lot of people around me thinks threesomes are awkward, I think its just right in this story, because I love all three main characters fairly equally, and I would hate to see any of them sad or distraught because there are more than two people involved in a relationship. I heard that later in the trio, Yuki is going to die, leaving Kaname and Zero, and I think that is a very interesting idea, despite the fact that I'm sure i'm going to burst into tears (like I did when Cross died) when Yuki dies. I think maybe you should write another story about the threesome if Yuki did not die, although it is probably not something you want to do, since it kind of contradicts what you already wrote. Just and idea. =]

I also really like your writing style, because most of the time, people think fanfiction and other writings of the sort is of low quality and nothing more than spontaneous ideas of people who are unwilling to settle for what the original author wrote or impatient enough to make up the rest of the story. However, in your case, I found the ideas truly intriguing, and your use of vocabulary and such very precise, although I do think you can maybe vary your adjectives a bit, since the words like "incorrigible" and "insufferable" have appeared many times in a story. Sometimes, when I encounter I word I don't know the meaning of, I would search it up and even write it down on a flashcard. I think my vocabulary have increase quite a bit by now, thanks to you.

I also want to write fanfiction and put down my ideas, but all I want is the three of them living happily and peacefully together, so there is really nothing for me the write. I am also not a very good writer myself, another reason I haven't, and is probably never going to, post any writing on the website. I also find it difficult to write lemon and lime stuff, because I would just start blushing and going crazy just with the idea of writing something like that. I was wondering how you can do it so beautifully. =]

Well, I guess this response is rather long, so I should stop now. I love your writing and your stories, thanks for making my boring high school years so much more interesting.

I love William Blake's The Tiger!

I just read the whole story and have to say that this is the best Vampire Knight fanfiction I have read. It's so realistic and I could actually se this as a good ending. Keep up the good work and keep writing, you're good at it ^^

OMG! This was AMAZING! It has to be the best Vampire Knight fic I have EVER read!

Shodai-Uzukage here.
At first I wasn't really into VK. But now, I am. And when I started searching for VK fan-fics, I found yours. I have to admit, it was well written. And the damn lemons. *drools* It was awesome.

This story is incredible but I feel bad for poor Kaien.. it seems he's the one not getting any action in this, does he get to do anything or is he just a background character?

Absolutely beautiful!

Wow! Extremely hot and delicious! More exciting because of the intruder. Thought they would never finish what they started, but so glad they did =)

oh no...finally managed to read the whole fic. I not happy that it ended but I'm happy that i got to read a good fic. You really are talented, look forward to reading your other fic. Keep up the excellent work. love Ebony-Knight

tear jerker, you made me cry. Haven't cried in a long time... how do you plan to make it up to me, huh?

still sad, poor Kaname, wish I culd hold you in my arms, though I know you prefer to be in Zero's arms. nice story

sad chappie, *SOBS*

The story is blasting

you rock, gal! or are you a boy? male or female. It doesn't say on your profile. It's official now, this is the best story i EVER READ