Last line - brilliance
And one of the rare occurences where you see James devotion to Sirius, plus it was adorable, for lack of a better word. Similar to that story, I can't remember it's title but...yeah nevermind this is a review on your writing skills!
*thumbs up and grin*

Renata Vane... Genius. Love the short one shot. It's very realistic. I wouldn't call it plotless, it was just... exactly what the summary says. Just a Quidditch accident. Hilarious.

I LOVE your Quiditch stories! They are so amusing, witty, and the characterisation is quite good! I don't understand why don't you write HP anymore! :(

I liked this story, especially the mention of Renata Vane.

Aw, that was so cute! You wrote all of the characters so well, and I love how you made a Renata Vane. :) Great job!
Lots of Love
MilyMB

Great! I bit too short, but still great! I loved that line of Sirius replying that there's two of them, it felt like he really meant it with all seriousness, thinking it explained eveything, and he had done no error. :)

Yet another great story... I love the name play on Harry's stalker.