Very funny, Sirius is nearly as good as Luna Lovegood when it comes to comentating, maybe better ;)

Absolutely brilliant. Sirius would have made quite the interesting commentator indeed

That was a really funny and well written fic, I loved how well you described everything so well only using the 'voices' of two characters.
Sirius is a great commentator (although I am not sure if he can beat Luna, she was very funny as well so it may be a close tie), and McGonagall was just like she was in the books.
I hope that you will have a good day!

Lol, that was really good!

-laughs, amused- That's Sirius for you!! Funny bloke, for sure. ^^ Anyway, plz keep up the good work, okay? Ja! -^^-

I liked it, Sirius is a very interestinf commentator. *grin*

Classic!

Hysterical: plain and simple.

Awesome writing!

This is fun. Especially the way that Sirius manages to not only have a conversation with McGonagall, but he keeps on interacting with the players that are on the field. I doubt many other commentators get so many dirty glares. Particularly not from both teams...

lol very funny story
this line cracked me up:
"Yes, Professor. Avery in control of the Quaffle, he dodges past Prewett and… Yes! Nice save by Fenwick, and may I just say what a fine girl she is."

"No, Mr. Black, you may not!"
you have to love McGonagall...
you really should write more one shots like this in the future!
one thing though, james was seeker not chaser in hogwarts...
-bookwormandpoet

i loved it...thought it would have been more interesting with Sirius' brother as Slytherin seeker...ah well, it was still classic Sirius...

*laughs* That ending was brilliant. Hehe. You write these little oneshots very well, I think. This one could almost be from the actual book. I love how biased Sirius is. *grins* Nice comments. Thank you, I loved it ^_-

X Wolfje

HILARIOUS! -broad smile on her face-
I absolutely LOVE it!

Haha! I liked, "I now shall leave you all to your cheering for I surely need to accompany the git that calls himself my best mate to the hospital wing, again. This is fast becoming a tradition and not one of our better ones, I tell you. Anyway, party on the Gryffindor Common Room, bring your drin--… Er, I mean a quiet celebratory gathering with tea and biscuits, Professor…" Best line ever.
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Oh, this was hysterical! You really got what Sirius must have been like as a teenager. So many great comments and zingers in there it's hard to pick my favorites. The banter between Sirius and McGonagall was terrific. I did notice a few typos. Still, funny story.

"Anyway, party on the Gryffindor Common Room, bring your drin- Er I mean a quiet celebratory gathering with tea and biscuits, Professor..." "Sure you do, Mr. Black, sure you do." That there line made it hard to breathe, I was laughin' so hard! Very funny. Usually I hate fics with no description, but I loved this! Description would have made this boring. It was great, though.