I LOVE this story. It's so original and all of the charecters are in charecter (something I sometimes have trouble with... :)) So good. Love that pairing... XD

sweet ^^ i love this one

It is very nice. Just a couple of things. I assume you're going by the anime with this story because well, in the manga, Ukyo's appartment is little more than one room, she has no kitchen or a shower and she has to go to the public bath; that can be seen a few times. Also, putting 'Konatsu' and 'visitng his family' in the same sentence is like putting 'fire' and 'gun powder' together; in Konatsu's arc in the manga is explained and shown that his stepmother and stepsisters want him death. Also, it is hinted Konatsu's step family dies... You didn't mention Akari either.

Well, that's just nitpicking on my part and I'm being a rude person, I know. I just wanted to let you know those details so you can have them in mind for future stories.

The rest of the fanfic is very sweet and very well done, I shall check the rest of your stuff if it's that good.

really nice!! ^_^~♥

kule...thumbs u[ 2 u!

I love it... Pretty awesome for a oneshot!

Well, interesting one-shot, gets me interested in reading memories. I love the pairing of Ryoga and Ukyo and this out-take has got my attention. Keep up the good work.

Fantastic, simply fantastic. I enjoyed how you wrote Ryouga and Ukyou personalities as well. Excellent perspective on their relationship and how it changed over the years. Generally, I enjoy Ukyou/Ryouga parings because of the manga/anime never letting any hint of a relationship at all.

However, as a MINOR suggestion, possibly breaking up the sentences would be more easier to read. However, the spelling and detail was top notch in this one shot. Fine job with the story, have a excellent day and take care.

Ruto Kuntai