That was really cute. I enjoyed reading. I love Jim angst!
:-)

Corny ending? I don't think so, I loved it! You wrote them perfectly in character, too! It's really good, and shows the strong bonds between the characters in OutlawStar.

Aaawww, this was sweet.

hehe, i'm kinda a pyro too. not that much, but i qualify.

Cool Cool story, i loved the way suzuka talks! she's my fav char...eheh. Jim's in second! don't worry! *grins nervously at all the jim fans' death stares* er, hi guys...

Thank you! I've been looking everywhere for a little WAFF. Take it from me, there are far to few "Happily Ever Afters" Than anyone would believe.

quite refreshing and insightful!

That was a great story. You kept us all in the dark until the end. Good writing style. Keep it up.

it was a very good story. i like it a lot

;.; that was soooooo sad! i really liked it_ great writing!

He needs a hug. Oh wait! He got one! He got several, in fact! Well, all is complete, then! _

awwww...how cute is this? *hugs story* too cute

I really like this story. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

aaaaaaaaaw...that was SO sweet... _ 0

Sappy ending? Indeed! (Like I'm one to talk). But still a good read and worth my time...

corny yes...but it was still good. Well done and please continue to wright Outlaw Star stuff.