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Reviews For: The Adventures of Jack Campbell Series

Leigh A. Sumpter
2008-08-30
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if this is supposed to be a real series or not. If it is, then find the proper category or post it under Misc Books. If it isn't, then go to FictionPress. This does not belong in The A-List category.
GiganticTidalWave
2007-12-24
ch 1,
abuseHere is how I would recommend fixing this story:

1) Buy a large furnace, one that is big enough to fit a human being inside

2) Take this story off and stop insulting writers that write halfway decent stories

3) Throw any record of this story into the furnace (this would include the computer this was submitted on, any scraps of paper you wrote ideas on, etc.)

4) Throw yourself inside the furnace to prevent you from ever writing ** like this again!

Or you could just skip to step number four, I think that would suffice.

With love,

GTW

How this coincides with the A-List is beyond me.
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