That was beautifully written.

-Andrea

very nicely written n though I would want to know more from her pov this is enough.
good job.

aw...

Nicely done, thank you :-)

"The words echoed in her head. She didn't know if Ben was Dean's son, would never know. What she did know was that for everyday of her life it would haunt her - he wasn't like the others, he was someone Ben would have been proud to call Dad."

This was a wonderful one shot with a kicker of an ending. I like that you have Lisa not being sure if Dean is or isn't Ben's father.

Sweet. Very well done, and I like your Lisa pov - it's always interesting to look at Dean from another angle.

Nice job!

ahh awesome, I love how open ended it is. You don't say he's Dean's son but you don't completely disregard it either, so there's the tiniest possibility :D yay for AU's yay

wonderful - powerful and heartrending.

oh you are killing me LOL that last line just about broke my heart... great job

Damn! Just... Damn that was good!

Nicely done. Very pleasant to read a mature fanfic that stays within the canon.

One question I had about the episode was how a single mom that didn't seem to have a job was able to live in a gated community. Your answer was pretty close to my own train of thought.

Oh, that was lovely - you really got a feeling for what a lot of single mothers must feel - that their child is theirs alone and they don't want some guy muscling his way in to spoil everything.

I don't think Ben was Dean's son - I think Lisa would have told him when that line "I would have been proud to be his dad" came out - but I really love the 'maybe' spin you put on it in this story.

home run again! You are seriously wonderful at capturing the emotion of a moment and i always love to read your writing.

It's a beautiful tag and I think it fits perfectly with the episode - she said it herself just beofre the blood test - she had a type for leather jackets and no permemant address; so there wouldnt' have been anyone to take the test agaist.

Anyway, i'm picking holes in the plot, but i really think that one was placed there by Kripke on purpose and you've filled it with just the right dose of possibility.

Thanks for posting!

Aw! This was wonderful!

Aww. Lovely.