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StrikeBack
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
Nitya? Is this you?
- Nikka
SilverLunarStar
2007-10-13 . chapter 1
LOVE the "...matching broken puzzle pieces."

Great metaphor: "It's a bleeding wound that does not truly go away."

Perfect "It's not out of a cheap and predictable fairy tail."

{Great usage of it in "the world seemed a restless place"!}

Like the fact that Ron and Ginny understand.

"Sometimes you don't need happily ever after." - Aw~! So cute!

{Question: Any particular reason why your titles are lower cased?}

Lovely job!

~*Eli
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