this was actaullt pretty good. it was the only bobby/loor romance that i read completely through from beginning to end. not bad but not great.

interesting romance.
GO PENDRAGON!1one1

YES! Good Bobby/Loor. I luvs it. Great story.

Aww...that was beautiful. In character, well written, all that good stuff. I absolutely love this pairing. Great job =)

Absolutely beautiful. Makign Loor sweet, without losing a bit of her tough warrior spirit. Much better then a fc where she suddeny; gets all girlish to impress.

Ah-MAZING! You captured the elements of Loor and Bobby perfectly. Please keep writing

That was so awsome. I love this pairing, and I was sad to find how little of it there was. In fact this is the only one. :(
But for being the only one there, it was well written and entertaining.

I thank thee.
~Keira

Hey, since i'm an important person how about you write another love story on Loor and Pendragon. I mean really this was good. I think that you should listen to the readers comments and write another one. Please, make it much longer. you have a talent.

That was a great story. i think you should add on more or start a new one.

FRICKEN' AWESOME!

Your writing is awesome! Bobby/Loor foreverz!!

Awe, cute. And powerfully written.

I really enjoyed this story; there aren't many well written BobbyLoor fics out there, but this is one of them.

They were a little OC, but not too much so that they seemed like different people.

Thank you for sharing this kind of thing with other people, 'cuz we need it after all the sucky ones. xD

Se Wyrda Draumr,
Epiphany

Aww. That was really cute. I was needing a good fluff fic. ^.^ However, Loor's speech -- and the other Batus, as well -- is always very precise. What I mean by that is that they always say "cannot" instead of "can't", "you are" instead of "you're", and so on. I'm forgetting the name for words like those, but oh well, you can probably understand what I'm saying. Apart from that, thanks for a sweet read!

WOW...

Aw. That was really sweet. It completely melted my heart and made me smile.