thats sweet :]

This was really well done. I loved the little glimpses you gave us of Cho and Cedric's relationship, and I particularly enjoyed the way you handled the theme of trying to stay afloat and find air. Great job.

I loved this - it has a perfect balance of angst and hope, and I love the glimpses of memories we see. I love Cedric/Cho, and this was beautiful :)

THIS WAS LOVELY! I thought the line about his laughter being a funeral dirge was lovely and the last line, brilliant.

This was a very beautiful story. So poetic, so well written. Great job on this!

Oh. my. GOSh. I LOVE YOU! u share my heart! i am a huge huge huge huge huge ced/cho fan, and i write their fics too!! and this, was just so beautiful and amazing...and poetic.. i love it when ppl capture the characters' moments so well. even when theyre minors... i just love adore and miss cedric. he was perfect. and thank you SO much for writing this beautiful fic. keep writing! :D

I really liked the style you wrote this in. It was loose and emotional, and angsty. Very, very, angsty. But that's okay-you did warn us. :) Keep up the good work.

i haven't read many Cho/Cedrics, (most people up here seem to hate Cho)but I like this, how its so angsty, then at the end, hopeful. did I mention i love the title? Anyways, awesome.:)

i haven;t read your story so done get offended but:

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that is a petition to stop horrible writers, please pass it along for people to sign. just add the two extra w's where it's supposed to be w. instead of w.