 Hikari Adams 2008-03-08 . chapter 1Aw, this was sweet. I liked the way you wrote Konan as being a human, rather than the paper doll I usually see her depicted as. The way you described her relationship with Pein/Nagato was beautiful.
Kari-chan |
 Kratos Wilder 2007-12-09 . chapter 1YAY!! That was so cute! I like what you did when they were little too. Since all that seems to be more...misty for me. I liked it all, and it was a good truth! Thanks for that!!
Kratos Wilder |
 white moon dragon of light 2007-10-31 . chapter 1It was a good story bye! |
 Papermates 2007-10-21 . chapter 1Beautiful . |
 Nymbis 2007-10-13 . chapter 1I liked this very much :) It's exactly how I see the relationship between them- excellent story :) |
 flowerangel050 2007-10-13 . chapter 1yes!! me likes!! XD
Konan x Pein |
 Tsubasa-Angel 2007-10-13 . chapter 1This is AMAZING!
I ewspecially like the flashback in the beginning!
Awesome job! |
 theunknownvoice 2007-10-13 . chapter 1I loved it. It was simple and beautiful. I like how Konan never actually says she loves him but its implied. She just says she doesn't want him to be lonely.
This is awesome. Keep up the good work. |