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Anyssia
2008-10-07 . chapter 3
Damn, that's really, really sad! T.T But I love the way you build your story and always use meaningful words.
Arvon1
2008-09-11 . chapter 3
I really liked your twins series, but you left us hanging here.

The twins are great. The trouble they caused at daycare and then the trip to China town sound fun.

Need to get the team and the capt'n back together and get Li Pong out of trouble.
roxi1013
2008-07-26 . chapter 3
I love these stories. It makes me wonder what Blair was like growing up.
Sarai
2007-12-30 . chapter 3
Can't wait until you deal w/ the uncle. Let's see, he has all of Mag 7, and Major Crimes after him. *smirk*
Cassandra30
2007-12-19 . chapter 3
Wonderful chapter! Oh my God! Those poor boys! Dev! That would be enough trauma for any child but for a sentinel?? As for the a$$hole who took those babies to the morgue well when the Seven and Jim and Blair get done I'll take my turn! Love it! Love it! Write faster!
shannbooks
2007-12-02 . chapter 3
Poor Dev, just wanted to give him a hug. He needs his Tad and Uncles. I hope they get away from that trial soon. Jim & Blair are doing great with them though. So whats up with the case??
Great chapter as ususa. Please Please don't keep us waiting on what is happening next. Shameless begging for more soon! Maybe Vin can get a quick phone call. Update soon! Thanks again for posting your stories for us to enjoy.
Vinsmouse
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
Good chapter, poor Dev, that would be really rough. Looking forward to more stories. Take care,
Mouse
southernfrau
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
Hi Mimi,
Oh mercy girl, my heart dropped so low I was sitting on it. That poor poor baby...that is just horrifying! Oh boy, I wish I could get my hands on that so called Uncle Ashburn (more like Assburn, if you ask me). My heavens it's a wonder that Dev wasn't left in a drooling vegetative state because of his ordeal. I do hope Jim tells Vin and then they both come up with a sneaky, underhanded totally righteous pay back for Ashburn...something that will leave him squatting in naked, hungry squalor. But on the bright side you saved the duck, and you had Jim and Blair right there providing some much needed TLC...even if Blair did end up driving the porcelain bus over the sickening revelation. You just don't do emotion half-way do you? Southernfrau
katfairy
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
I'm thinking a joint Major Crimes-Team Seven visit to a certain uncle. I do hope they get creative...
steamfan
2007-12-01 . chapter 3
OH MY G-! No wonder Dev doesn't talk. Poor baby...

Oh, and from what I know Sugar Gliders wouldn't be good pets either. They require a lot of care, fresh food only and regular feedings.
Duchess67
2007-11-30 . chapter 3
Oh my gosh... *shudder* How HORRIBLE! You do the absolute WORST things to your characters sometimes. This is too much. *shaking my head*

The rest of the story is very sweet and cute, but that poor little kid. I know he's not real, but you write them so well I THINK of them as real, almost. *sigh*
crism1976
2007-10-28 . chapter 2
LOL! What a treat. I enjoyed the entire scene, but I think my favorite was either Blair's 'date' the duck or Jim's assumption about just what Blair was up to! *snicker* Thanks for sharing this, I look forward to more. :-)
Cassandra30
2007-10-22 . chapter 2
Love those twins! Where did they learn Cantonese?? From Li Pong?? Hope they can get the stuff out without killing the duck! Sure hope Li Pong is ok! Another great story!!
Vinsmouse
2007-10-19 . chapter 2
Good chapter. Somehow I think Uncle Ezra had more to do with that hundred dollar bill than Vin did. Looking forward to more, please update soon. Take care,
Mouse
southernfrau
2007-10-19 . chapter 2
Hi Mimi,
I shall never see another duck, real, cartoon, stuffed or otherwise without thinking about Uncle Bear's date. OMG! That hit my funny bone, not just the scene where Blair finds out he bought a duck instead of making a date, but also when Beau explains to Simon that it's Blair's date. And to top it off it looks like the duck just maybe 'a stool pigeon', or at least an informant. I do hope they won't have to kill the duck to get the lump (which I assume is some sort of message or evidence) off him. I am afraid the twins would be heart broken. I wonder who is in trouble Li Pong...or is it Ezra and she's trying to warn him. Southernfrau
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