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| Rat 2008-06-11 ch 4,  | abuseInteresting story, I like the haunted house a lot. Cool fic! |
| skag trendy 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseI don't know what to say. Another masterpiece. Kind regards, ST.x. |
| Isabellec 2008-01-10 ch 4, | abuseExquisite! Lovely story, and very poignant insight into the brothers, especially Sam. |
| friendly 2007-10-26 ch 4, | abusegood job. there is going to be a sequel right.. |
| LadyVic 2007-10-25 ch 4, | abuseI loved this story. You did a great job with the interaction between the brothers, I love their little arguments and the way they're not seeing eye to eye on issues, and both sticking to their guns. It was very much in character. I think the ending was very effective. You don't provide any easy solutions, you just have the ghost point Sam in the right direction and give him a little nudge. The rest is up to Sam. It makes it so much more meaningful when Sam finally sees that maybe that little spark of hope is there. Very nice job. |
| Kaewi 2007-10-25 ch 4, | abuseNice ending to a good story! I enjoying reading this. Excellent Limp :) |
| Poaetpainter 2007-10-24 ch 4, | abuse..But theres going to be a sequel though, right? |
| sendintheclowns 2007-10-24 ch 4, | abuseWhat a great line: The late afternoon glared at him, and Sam didn't hesitate to glare back. Loved the story. |
| sendintheclowns 2007-10-24 ch 3, | abuseGood work with the little girl ghost. I think Sam does have faint hope in his heart otherwise he would have thrown in the towel a long time ago. I totally buy into Dean telling Sam if he can make it to the car then he won't take him to the hospital. Although he keeps passing out which seems ominous. |
| ziggy.uk 2007-10-24 ch 4, | abuseGood ending, and guess Sam has to let go of all the guilt and look for that little light inside him, the little girl ghost obviously found it and so will Sam! A well written and entertaining story, thanks! |
| ROBINV 2007-10-24 ch 4, | abuseI want to think that Sam found out how to save Dean and himself after this story finished. And because I want to cling to hope myself, I'm going to believe it. Excellent story! Love, Robin |
| Ciya 2007-10-23 ch 3, | abuseI'd love to see that last bit played out in the show. |
| ziggy.uk 2007-10-23 ch 3, | abuseWhat a very wise little ghost, guess Sam fell through the floorboards for a reason! Unfortunately he got quite a few injuries as well as words he would do well to heed! Trust Dean to give in to his little brothers requests not to go to the hospital but those boys really need a heart to heart talk - Dean has less than a year to live and Sam is slowly killing himself in his desperation to save him. As the little girl implied, in order to save Dean he needs to save himself first! Awesome story, brilliantly written! |
| mollieclarke 2007-10-23 ch 3, | abuseexcellent chapter plz update soon |
| Poaetpainter 2007-10-23 ch 3, | abuseWow.. amazing detail with Sam. |