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Mellie Erdmann
2008-04-06
ch 7,
abuseHi!

That was so adorable! Really cute!

Great job.

~Mellie~
MaryRose
2008-01-22
ch 7,
abuseTo date yours is the only fic started especially for me that has been completed. Thank you for that. I know it was for Fred too. I'm not forgetting that. *giggles*
MaryRose
2008-01-22
ch 6,
abuseAw! So sweet.
MaryRose
2008-01-22
ch 5,
abuseHappiness is great.
MaryRose
2008-01-22
ch 4,
abuseYou did well with is paring too. At first I was like but I told you P Trance, not G Trance. But you had a plan.
MaryRose
2008-01-22
ch 3,
abuseGreatest wedding present ever.
MaryRose
2008-01-22
ch 2,
abuseI still love this.
squid109
2007-12-08
ch 6,
abuseI was pleasantly surprised at how well you made Trance deserving of the readers sympathy. She seems to be getting jerked around by her people pretty badly.
squid109
2007-12-08
ch 5,
abuseAh, Harper, you smooth talking devil. You always know just what to say to a girl to make her feel appreciated. Seriously, I know that you seem to like to write Beka and Dylan best of all the characters but I think that you actually write the other characters just as well if not better.
Katarite
2007-11-05
ch 4,
abuseI have been out of the loop for a couple of chapters. I really like where this story is going. I really enjoyed your segway into the alternate timeline and the versions of the characters that populated it. I can't wait to see what you come up with for the rest of the story!
squid109
2007-11-02
ch 4,
abuseSad but a nice lead in to the next chapter
squid109
2007-10-22
ch 2,
abuseI have a lot of empathy for Dylan with this chapter.
Katarite
2007-10-22
ch 2,
abuseLol, I wonder if those sorts of thoughts actually go through a man's head when a woman is confessing her feelings for him. You have to feel sorry for poor Dylan, not knowing what to say, or even if he should be saying it if he did know :-P. Very interesting read, as usual! I will be waiting for the next part.
MaryRose
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abuseOh, we are. Thank you so much for the good wishes and this lovely fic, of course. Yay fic! *sends mind control thought waves ilexx's way You will make this into a long epic, laughs* Yeah, I gotta be me but you know that and I think you like me anyway. I certainly like you and this fic. Look forward to the rest.
Katarite
2007-10-14
ch 1,
abuseI like it ^_^. You do a wonderful job of getting inside the heads of the characters, and I can't wait to see the rest of what you come up with.
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