-sniff sniff-
I dont like it its to much like the last episode
Jordans words that is.
and i hated that episode, it made me cry.

hey! wonderful, amazing, cool, great... i don't know what else to say. I mean i really really like it, every point of view is great, full of feelings and memories.

i would have like that eva/molly's pov was longer but it's still good.

Interesting, deep, just perfect. Goog job!

Wow, just wow.

I don't read very many pieces like this, but I totally love it when I do. They aren't just explanations of what's happening, but a whole nother level of awareness. It's as if the author breathes out the characters, and doesn't just observe them.

In all of the pieces, the references to their past made the piece more real than imaginable. I especially loved Aikka's exposition to his mother. It felt real.

And your composition with Jordan was so lovely. Just the spastic crying of his name seemed to jolt my out of normality, and let me hear her voice ringing.

Nice. Just, nice.

Wow. Beautiful work as always. ^_^ I loved Aikka's part best and how you protrayed his thoughts toward Molly. Excellent job. I look forward to your next one-shot ^_^

Sweet and sad. The Jordan one made me cry. MY POOR HUSBAND!