This was amazing. Dante and her conquests fascinate me, and she's just...brilliant and twisted, how she sees her containers almost as her dolls. I am pretty sure I understand what happened. If what I think happened, happened...then that is one of the most genius-sick ideas I've seen.

"I'm the maker now." Yeah, that's Dante all right.

Ah, it's well written. I like your choice of words and construction but...I don't get it. Sorry. I guess my mind cannot understand this piece of complicated art. Can you please try to explain it to me by PM or something? It's alright if you can't.

I like your story, but (maybe because I'm sleepy right now), I don't get it. I know you probably think I'm stupid, but my mind is not processing this information. However, like I typed earlier, I liked your story. Great Job!

Sincerely yours,

-Auto-Alchemechanicist-

P.S. Check out my fanfic in 4/24 or 4/25, I'm not sure of the date. I'd appreciate it alot if you R&R. That's if you want to, 'k? Well, have a good night, since it's already gonna be midnight for me right now. Bye. (By the way: my story's name is the necklace. I guess it's gonna be in the Family Genre or General, I don't really know, but I know that my story is about EdXWinry, and "someone else". Well, ok type 2 U later.

Agh. I completely understood everything until the second scene. I know what everything means, but I don't have a sense of what's going on... Though, it looks pretty good.

Either you'll have to dumb down your words or find a smarter audience if you want people to understand it.

...huh?

Looks bone-chilling...but... I don't get it. 0_0 can you please send me a PM or something explaininhg this (if you don't mind, of course)?