I like your story, but (maybe because I'm sleepy right now), I don't get it. I know you probably think I'm stupid, but my mind is not processing this information. However, like I typed earlier, I liked your story. Great Job!

Sincerely yours,
-Auto-Alchemechanicist-
P.S. Check out my fanfic in 4/24 or 4/25, I'm not sure of the date. I'd appreciate it alot if you R&R. That's if you want to, 'k? Well, have a good night, since it's already gonna be midnight for me right now. Bye. (By the way: my story's name is the necklace. I guess it's gonna be in the Family Genre or General, I don't really know, but I know that my story is about EdXWinry, and "someone else". Well, ok type 2 U later.

Agh. I completely understood everything until the second scene. I know what everything means, but I don't have a sense of what's going on... Though, it looks pretty good.

Either you'll have to dumb down your words or find a smarter audience if you want people to understand it.

...huh?

Looks bone-chilling...but... I don't get it. 0_0 can you please send me a PM or something explaininhg this (if you don't mind, of course)?