Just as good as The Terrible Loss. Weak in suspense, but I still like the story. Wee.

I liked this a lot. One thing though, a bit of an sudden ending. Actually, I'm only saying that because I really want to read more...but stories can't go forever, can they?

Hmmm, you're right. I changed it. What didya think of the story itself?

All that language should make this story at least rated PG-13.