This was a really good story but you could've warned readers that it was sad! Its been a long long time that I ever got tearful from reading fan fic but this story did just that! Great job with the story though! :)

great story

I'm sitting here with tears pouring down my face.. I can't remember when anything I've read or seen has ever affected me this much..

I am so crying right now. This is an amazing story that I won't ever forget. Thank you for putting your heart and soul into it, then having the courage to share.

I just read this story and it was the most emotional thing i have ever read. This was extrodinary and i loved it. So sad for John and Sam. I have tears in my eyes. Thanks for this wonderful story.

Superb! I can't believe I only discovered YOU and your story now, so long after you posted your story - my loss, but what a discovery! I loved very moment of it, even the end. Thank you!

*sob*

very interesting story, you have a nice style, but in part one you metioned Chloe playing softball, and then you metioned in part two John teaching her to play softball, as if she had never learned. I like your characterization, though it seems for the most part you picture George as a wise crack. The characters all had at least two dimensions...okay, so maybe a little more than that, in the story, and for the most part it all seemed to flow together up the good work.

The whole story was beatifully written and very to tell you the truth I did not like the end, the three of them deserved better specially after all that suffering and all of Sam's and Chloe losses,I just like to believe in happy endings specially if the characters had as though as these did.

Loved the story. One of the best I've ever read. Although the ending was sad, I wouldn't have passed on it. Please keep writing. ou are very talented.

Wow! This is a great story. I had tears in my eyes at the end. ) It's too bad that John had to die.

Very good. I loved it, but it was so sad. I wish John didn't have to die, but it still was good.

Melissa